Winter Beauty
Shimmering white covers the earth7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Winter Beauty, has the right set up and creates a scene of snowy bliss where the chill and bother of snow becomes its positive aspect.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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This 1-6-1, Winter Beauty, has the right set up and creates a scene of snowy bliss where the chill and bother of snow becomes its positive aspect.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Wendy G
You have chosen a beautiful image to support your words, and the presentation colours are perfect. You have captured the beauty of the snow in your few words also! Best wishes for your lovely entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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You have chosen a beautiful image to support your words, and the presentation colours are perfect. You have captured the beauty of the snow in your few words also! Best wishes for your lovely entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Thank you Wendy
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Great entry for the 1-6-1 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count
Good syllables count and connection between lines for a better flow.
The rhymes don't seem forced.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Great entry for the 1-6-1 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count
Good syllables count and connection between lines for a better flow.
The rhymes don't seem forced.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Thank you Gypsy
Comment from Earl Corp
It's not too often I review a 1-6-1 poem that can make three lines rhyme. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy. Have a great holiday season
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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It's not too often I review a 1-6-1 poem that can make three lines rhyme. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy. Have a great holiday season
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you Earl that means a lot coming from such an exceptional poet as yourself 🙂
Comment from kiwisteveh
If I had to pick a fault here, it would be that neither the artwork or the first two lines (or the title for that matter) suggests that there is a storm or strong wind blowing...
Mind you I can't come up with a more suitable word without changing the whole thing...
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soft iridescent glow
Snow???
Steve
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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If I had to pick a fault here, it would be that neither the artwork or the first two lines (or the title for that matter) suggests that there is a storm or strong wind blowing...
Mind you I can't come up with a more suitable word without changing the whole thing...
Show
soft iridescent glow
Snow???
Steve
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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There doesn't have to be a storm for snow to blow. a little wind can blow snow around that was my thought. Thank you. 😊
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with the three rhymes and marvelous imagery.
I prefer no snow these days, but enjoyed it when younger.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with the three rhymes and marvelous imagery.
I prefer no snow these days, but enjoyed it when younger.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you
Comment from E. Denison
Lovely 1-6-1 entry here, mystery writer. We are just getting to the snowy months in my neck of the woods, so we have this to look forward to for many weeks ahead. One suggestion here would be to find an image that matches the beautiful imagery you've created in your lines. Picture or not, this is a well-constructed poem. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Lovely 1-6-1 entry here, mystery writer. We are just getting to the snowy months in my neck of the woods, so we have this to look forward to for many weeks ahead. One suggestion here would be to find an image that matches the beautiful imagery you've created in your lines. Picture or not, this is a well-constructed poem. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you
