Comment from Gert sherwood

Exceptional

scongrove
your chapter in the book THE CURSE
Evil Entity
scongrove
I like how you are building up the next chapter what is going on
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And you drew my interest when I read-
the institute getting paid to do experiments on their patients. Although Joseph didn't know what kind of experiments they were doing, he suspected

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021

Thanks so much, Gert :)
Glad you enjoyed and the chapter drew your interest. It's going to get tense from now on.

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by Gert sherwood on 23-Nov-2021

scongrove
you are welcome
Gert

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

Veronica is coming to the fore again, trying to entice Carrie into receiving some uncomfortable celebrations, either Joseph really scared her beyond belief, or has had a spell cast on her. Jessica, her friend, calls her to tell her she saw Joseph and offers to invite him over, but an ever cautious Carrie says she'll take care of it. As always, I love the way you're working towards reconciliation in your characters, beautifully written Shana,, blessings Roy
Typo : Dr. Manos(') patients 2: Something more (of) the lines. Along?
3: but Carrie hadn't (had) the guts to...

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021

Thanks so much, dear friend :)
The story is moving back to Carrie and Joseph. We will see what will happen with the couple... and the Shadow.
Thank you for catching my mistakes. I'm so happy to have your great eyes and wisdom.

Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 22-Nov-2021

Well done dear friend,

Comment from AJ McCall

Exceptional

SHANA! You know how I don't like your cliffhangers, ESPECIALLY THIS ONE!!! I was wanting some action, some BOOM! POP! POW! Handsome werewolves coming to save the day, lol. I don't think I can wait until next Monday for the next chapter. The anticipation is TOO MUCH!! But I enjoyed this chapter. I don't think I read the chapters where Joseph talked to Veronica. But nonetheless, he definitely did something. I really liked this chapter solely because it was mainly about Carrie. NOW I NEED SOME ACTION! HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER SHANA!! I NEED IT!!!!!

(P.S I always like the way you manage to put the pictures together for your posts. My favorite one here is the one with the dark creatures standing behind the little girl. I don't know why lol.)

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021

Thanks AJ :)
The werewolf and creature battle will come eventually. I've got to get some Carrie and Joseph time in. But believe me, there will be a fight before this ends, involving the Breedline, vampires, and some mysterious battle angels.
I've started the next chapter and hopefully I can get it done before the end of Wednesday since it will be a short week due to the holiday. I will dig deep! LOL!
Thanks for all your awesome feedback. BTW, the pictures I gathered for this post was kind of wicked. I was hoping to catch readers attention. The child with the creature was kind of creepy, but eye catching I thought.

Thanks again & happy holiday!
Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by AJ McCall on 22-Nov-2021

Oh, good because I can't wait to read THAT chapter, lol. Yes! Dig deep! You have a great holiday as well! Oh, and before I forget, YOU'RE WELCOME! ;)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

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 Comment Written 22-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021

Thanks Alcreator :)
Your feedback is greatly appreciated! Stay safe & merry for the holiday my friend.
Sincerely,
Shana :)