Comment from amahra

Excellent

Nice artwork you chose for your writing--for simple. The poem is very well written. I think it is a very fine poem for the contest entry. So, best wishes in the contest. Great job.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021

Thank you very much. Your kind words and good wishes are appreciated.

Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante

Excellent

Beautifully written; this is a gem. I wish I had written it, myself! This is an excellent description of the meaning of life, for someone who is walking the Christian walk.
I love your picture, which shows love growing, as it should, in our lives. You have also chosen great scripture verses to go with your poem and share the Good News about Jesus.


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 Comment Written 21-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021

Thank you very much for such a lovely review. I very much appreciate your words. Is there any way you can think of that I might improve it to get five stars?

reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 22-Nov-2021

Oh, no! I thought I had given you a six. I must have slipped my finger down, instead of up. What number did I give you? I'll check with Tom, to see if this can be fixed, but while I changed it to a five, I don't think there's any way to change anything under a six, to a six, and vice versa. I am very sorry!
Thank you for saying something. God bless you, my Christian friend.
Love, Mary Kay xoxo

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021

Mary Kay that's fine! Your words were so beautiful and so encouraging. You gave me a four but if you want to change it to a five you can go back to the poem and see your review and update it. I am sure Tom will help you if you need him to. Sending you a hug. Blessings too.

reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 22-Nov-2021

Hi Anonymous Christian Writer, thank you for being so gracious and understanding about this. I already changed the rating to a five, which should be reflected in the review. I'm so happy that you liked it.
I sent Tom a message to find out whether it's too late to change the rating to a six, but I'm pretty sure that between a six and all the other ratings there is "a great gulf fixed" and once you choose, you can't reverse it -- so I am very sorry, this poem really deserves a six! Maybe I will have a chance to make it up to you, somewhere down the line, whoever you may be! Hugs and blessings to you, too! - Mary Kay

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021

I am very happy with a five, many thanks! My hand has slipped inadvertently a few times, and I have accidentally given a four. But even just knowing you thought it was worth a six is wonderful. More important is that it should honour the One who gives meaning to my life.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

There is a void in every person that only the Lord can fill.As your excellent, expressive poem conveys, we should want to "KNOW our holy God" and desire a place in Heaven; in addition, we should love others and live good lives.

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 Comment Written 21-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021

Thank you so much for your lovely review. You have understood perfectly.