She Loves
She loves many things about her kids4 total reviews
Comment from moongirlwriter
It's all there and it all rhymes. I'm not finding a thread that hold one verse together with another. While the poem is about the children, each of these verses could easily stand alone. You have used all the words, so cudos to you! There is a typo in the first stanza. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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It's all there and it all rhymes. I'm not finding a thread that hold one verse together with another. While the poem is about the children, each of these verses could easily stand alone. You have used all the words, so cudos to you! There is a typo in the first stanza. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thanks.
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No typo.
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a really cute poem. Seeing the picture of those cute kids made the words of your poem become animated. I swear I could see everything that they were doing. It's nice to hear about good kids having good fun and to be praised by the mom with lots of love shown to these little ones. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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This is a really cute poem. Seeing the picture of those cute kids made the words of your poem become animated. I swear I could see everything that they were doing. It's nice to hear about good kids having good fun and to be praised by the mom with lots of love shown to these little ones. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thanks.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is what Mothers do, the give their lives to their children and they are always there for them. I love your words here, children need to nurtured like this, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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This is what Mothers do, the give their lives to their children and they are always there for them. I love your words here, children need to nurtured like this, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Thanks.
Comment from oliver818
This is a sweet poem, full of childish fun and imagery from a dream childhood. I particularly liked the imagery of the kites at the end. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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This is a sweet poem, full of childish fun and imagery from a dream childhood. I particularly liked the imagery of the kites at the end. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Welcome. Thanks so much.
