Off the Bucket List
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Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-5-2, Off the Bucket List, has the proper formatting and witnesses yet another once-in-a-lifetime moment experienced. Now for the next--shot from a cannon.
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This 2-5-2, Off the Bucket List, has the proper formatting and witnesses yet another once-in-a-lifetime moment experienced. Now for the next--shot from a cannon.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good entry for the 2-5-2 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery. Good luck in the contest.
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Good entry for the 2-5-2 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2021
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 2-5-2 poem for the contest
with action words to match the theme.
I've done many things, but bungee jumping isn't one of them.
Great picture to match.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
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This is an excellent 2-5-2 poem for the contest
with action words to match the theme.
I've done many things, but bungee jumping isn't one of them.
Great picture to match.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 17-Nov-2021
Comment from RodG
I wonder if bungee jumping could ever appear on my bucket list even if I were decades younger. The thought of "free fall" into space HOPING you'll feel a tug is t-e-r-r-f-y-I-n-g! You convey my worst fears very well in only 9 syllables. Rod
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I wonder if bungee jumping could ever appear on my bucket list even if I were decades younger. The thought of "free fall" into space HOPING you'll feel a tug is t-e-r-r-f-y-I-n-g! You convey my worst fears very well in only 9 syllables. Rod
Comment Written 17-Nov-2021
Comment from Modee
Great picture and a good entry into the contest. I have never wanted to bungee jump, but have always wanted to skydive out of a perfectly good airplane, as they say.
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Great picture and a good entry into the contest. I have never wanted to bungee jump, but have always wanted to skydive out of a perfectly good airplane, as they say.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2021
Comment from Aspiring2Write
This is a wonderful 2-5-2 poem. Bungee jumping gives me the willies. I have not done it before, but I don't plan to. Wish you the best in the contest, and in your future writing.
Yours Truly,
Joshua Law
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This is a wonderful 2-5-2 poem. Bungee jumping gives me the willies. I have not done it before, but I don't plan to. Wish you the best in the contest, and in your future writing.
Yours Truly,
Joshua Law
Comment Written 17-Nov-2021
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Wow. I don't dare to try this. I used to go ot the State Fair watching people doing it while screaming with excitement mostly. I was with my son when he was young.
I admire you. I'm going to visit Antarctica which is one of them.
Well done.
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Wow. I don't dare to try this. I used to go ot the State Fair watching people doing it while screaming with excitement mostly. I was with my son when he was young.
I admire you. I'm going to visit Antarctica which is one of them.
Well done.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2021
