Stay with me
My prayer7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-5-2, Stay with Me, has the proper formatting and sees the use of prayer employed to keep a loved one close. Lets hope that prayers are answered.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2021
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This 2-5-2, Stay with Me, has the proper formatting and sees the use of prayer employed to keep a loved one close. Lets hope that prayers are answered.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2021
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Thanks
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Sweet entry for the 2-5-2 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2021
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Sweet entry for the 2-5-2 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2021
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Many thanks Gypsy.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When we have found someone who fulfils our very need we want to hang on to them, I can identify with your words here, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2021
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When we have found someone who fulfils our very need we want to hang on to them, I can identify with your words here, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2021
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Thanks Dolly. X
Comment from Modee
Simple and to the point. I think everyone could pray this prayer to someone in their lives. Whether mom or dad or husband or wife, etc. It is a universal prayer. Nice.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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Simple and to the point. I think everyone could pray this prayer to someone in their lives. Whether mom or dad or husband or wife, etc. It is a universal prayer. Nice.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
good presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Good use of rhyme
and a good message
showing your feelings
for this person and
the relationship.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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-Nice artwork and
good presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Good use of rhyme
and a good message
showing your feelings
for this person and
the relationship.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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Many thanks
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sally Law
Aw, this is so sweet and sacred. I still feel this way about my husband and family. Beautiful art choice for your short verse entry.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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Aw, this is so sweet and sacred. I still feel this way about my husband and family. Beautiful art choice for your short verse entry.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 17-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much Sally x
Comment from Aspiring2Write
This is a wonderful 2-5-2 poem. God will never leave you. Love the picture of the children praying. Wish you the best in your future writing.
Your Truly,
Joshua Law
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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This is a wonderful 2-5-2 poem. God will never leave you. Love the picture of the children praying. Wish you the best in your future writing.
Your Truly,
Joshua Law
Comment Written 17-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much
