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Timing

Time doesn't care about us it just keeps on going.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Pam (respa)
Excellent
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-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Good use of personification
and description of timing.
-A good concluding line
follows that up well.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2021

reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
    Thank you!
reply by Pam (respa) on 17-Nov-2021
    You are welcome.
Comment from Aspiring2Write
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This is a wonderful 2-5-2 poem. Time is here then it is gone. God has numbered our days. Wish you the best in your future writing.

Yours Truly,
Joshua Law

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2021

reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
    Thank you!