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Not drunk

3 total reviews 
Comment from B. J. Yates
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Love the picture! This piece is perfect for this time of year for it gives the feel of freezing weather. And for me when you say "not drunk" it insinuates that you do not have the added comfort of the warm feeling inside when one drinks. Great job!

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2021
    Thank you, you got my meaning. You review means a great deal to me.
Comment from Sally Law
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That's good to know, red-nosed one. I hope you have clear skies for your Christmas Eve flight.

Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the short verse poetry contest,
Sally :))

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
    Thank you for your review.
Comment from Aspiring2Write
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This is an interesting poem. Love the resemblance to Christmas. I would love to know what the line not drunk means. Other than that wish you the best.

Yours Truly,
Joshua Law

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
    Drunks are said to have red noses around here. Thank you for your review.