The Teacher
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "The Teacher - 12"Hostage situation at an elementary school.
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Comment from lancellot
Very interesting chapter. I am wondering about the all the detail after the kidnapper was arrested. It seemed like the important part was over, and there was delay, building suspense as to the kids safety or lives. Well written and no errors noted.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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Very interesting chapter. I am wondering about the all the detail after the kidnapper was arrested. It seemed like the important part was over, and there was delay, building suspense as to the kids safety or lives. Well written and no errors noted.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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Thank you kindly.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Mystery and Crime Fiction speaks about the teacher - 12, SWAT makes their move, and so does John; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, happy reviewing this legible on white background, my dear write-post more, fast, time is precious-limited, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Humanity, Truth. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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This Mystery and Crime Fiction speaks about the teacher - 12, SWAT makes their move, and so does John; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, happy reviewing this legible on white background, my dear write-post more, fast, time is precious-limited, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Humanity, Truth. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 17-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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Thank you kindly.
