While Santa say.
Mice Play.4 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifteen-word poem, While Santa say, has the proper word count and gives the jolly old elf some good words to say besides besides, "On Dasher, on Dancer, on etc.
  |
This fifteen-word poem, While Santa say, has the proper word count and gives the jolly old elf some good words to say besides besides, "On Dasher, on Dancer, on etc.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2021
Comment from NaughtieScribe
I love the sentiment of this work. Unfortunately, in the world in which we live, those who hurt you today will kill you tomorrow. That said the peace you wish for the reader is not lost. Well Written, Well Done.
|
I love the sentiment of this work. Unfortunately, in the world in which we live, those who hurt you today will kill you tomorrow. That said the peace you wish for the reader is not lost. Well Written, Well Done.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2021
Comment from Aspiring2Write
This is a wonderful poem. It is so hilarious. Pray that their pain isn't as bad as it could be. Wish you the best in your future writing.
Yours Truly,
Joshua Law
|
This is a wonderful poem. It is so hilarious. Pray that their pain isn't as bad as it could be. Wish you the best in your future writing.
Yours Truly,
Joshua Law
Comment Written 17-Nov-2021
Comment from Modee
Great verse ya got there. You'll be heaping hot coals on their head...or something like that. haha. My dad used to tell me to pray for those who hurt me. Good advice.
|
Great verse ya got there. You'll be heaping hot coals on their head...or something like that. haha. My dad used to tell me to pray for those who hurt me. Good advice.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
