Muddled Mental Malady
Anguish acquired from societal liars90 total reviews
Comment from royowen
What a fabulous entry in this contest, the rhyming is brilliant, in your face and wonderful. This is a brilliant usage of those few words to get one's pout across, you've done well, good luck, blessings Roy.
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What a fabulous entry in this contest, the rhyming is brilliant, in your face and wonderful. This is a brilliant usage of those few words to get one's pout across, you've done well, good luck, blessings Roy.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
Comment from Janet Foor
Alliteration in the title and the poem, rhyme in the short verse, and a powerful message as well. Very will done and thank you for drawing attention to an overwhelming concern in today's society.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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Alliteration in the title and the poem, rhyme in the short verse, and a powerful message as well. Very will done and thank you for drawing attention to an overwhelming concern in today's society.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
Comment from Ulla
Yes, I do believe that mental illness is looked down upon and often not taken serious, unless someone is considered certified. I've fortunately never suffered from depression or worse, but I know some of my friends who have. You're saying a lot in so few words. Good luck. Ulla:)))
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Yes, I do believe that mental illness is looked down upon and often not taken serious, unless someone is considered certified. I've fortunately never suffered from depression or worse, but I know some of my friends who have. You're saying a lot in so few words. Good luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
Comment from RGstar
Well done for highlighting. I agree with you completely. Mental illness is wide, affects many , where they are not even aware.
It is a very difficult subject and awareness is key.
Well done.
My best wishes.
RGstar
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Well done for highlighting. I agree with you completely. Mental illness is wide, affects many , where they are not even aware.
It is a very difficult subject and awareness is key.
Well done.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem gets rift to the point of how society can cause people pain physically, emotionally, and mentally.
Nice choice of artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dp
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This poem gets rift to the point of how society can cause people pain physically, emotionally, and mentally.
Nice choice of artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dp
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
Comment from Pantygynt
I like the way you have worked rhyme into this extremely short piece a and double syllable rhyme into the bargain. But what am I if I am not my mental illness?
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I like the way you have worked rhyme into this extremely short piece a and double syllable rhyme into the bargain. But what am I if I am not my mental illness?
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
Comment from oliver818
This is a very nice little poem, I enjoyed reading it. The matching of non grata and stigmata is very well done. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
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This is a very nice little poem, I enjoyed reading it. The matching of non grata and stigmata is very well done. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
Comment from Begin Again
Outstanding! Our family is currently dealing with a situation that leaves us floundering... We're left wondering if someone is truly lost in the cob-webbed corridors of their mind or if they consider us all fools believing what she says and does is the truth. Either way until one is certain, we must be careful as to how we approach the situation. One's words, especially false ones, can cut deeper than a knife.
Carol
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Outstanding! Our family is currently dealing with a situation that leaves us floundering... We're left wondering if someone is truly lost in the cob-webbed corridors of their mind or if they consider us all fools believing what she says and does is the truth. Either way until one is certain, we must be careful as to how we approach the situation. One's words, especially false ones, can cut deeper than a knife.
Carol
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Your contest entry makes a powerful state and used only six words. I am very impressed. Yes, Mental health does matter and people shouldn't judge others. Thank you for sharing and good luck.
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Your contest entry makes a powerful state and used only six words. I am very impressed. Yes, Mental health does matter and people shouldn't judge others. Thank you for sharing and good luck.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
Comment from SimianSavant
Using the image of an indelible mark left on someone from language is a powerful image, challenging the old adage about sticks and stones. How many times have I both used (usually unknowingly) and been the recipient of (usually knowingly) crushing language? It is worth a hard look. Recently someone told me about this great management practice of "catch someone doing something right". Thank you for posting this.
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Using the image of an indelible mark left on someone from language is a powerful image, challenging the old adage about sticks and stones. How many times have I both used (usually unknowingly) and been the recipient of (usually knowingly) crushing language? It is worth a hard look. Recently someone told me about this great management practice of "catch someone doing something right". Thank you for posting this.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
