Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

This is a nice poem about the magical change from night to morning. Sunrise is beautiful to watch, Take a deep breath and smell the freshness of the new dawn. Good luck with the contest.
Patty

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2021

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

This is a good poem about night dreaming, and the picture seems to be of dreaming also. I enjoy it because I can understand it, even knowing I am no poet. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2021

Comment from Aspiring2Write

Excellent

This is a wonderful Naani Poem. Dreams are like "images in the mind. You wrote this very well. Wish you the best in the contest, and in your future writing.

Yours Truly,
Joshua Law

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2021

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

"Images in the mind
pictures of the night
deep within subconscious
until morning light"
Good entry for the contest, describing our dreams. Good picture to illustrate.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2021

Comment from Eternal Muse

Exceptional

Oh, this is absolutely gorgeous, I love it! Beautiful presentation, nice rhyming, excellent visuals and a stunning artwork makes this a delight to read.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2021

Comment from Modee

Excellent

Pretty words, pretty picture - they go together. We all wonder what dreams mean and how they become a thing in your mind while you sleep. Strange the way we're made. Thanks for this one today.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2021