Crosses
The war to 'end' wars57 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Crosses ', is an exceptionally well-written piece. Nothing good ever came from war. It was a privilege to read and review a poem of this standard. To me this is definitely a six! I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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' Crosses ', is an exceptionally well-written piece. Nothing good ever came from war. It was a privilege to read and review a poem of this standard. To me this is definitely a six! I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much Duchess, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Roy, my friend you definitely deserved both.
Bless you, the Duchess
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Thank you Duchess
You're welcome Roy
Comment from zanya
A tribute to the brave and the fallen heroes who gave their lives, many so young and only at the beginning of their lives, for the cause of freedom in wars, wherever they occurred on our planet earth - the pain and grief following their loss is almost tangible
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A tribute to the brave and the fallen heroes who gave their lives, many so young and only at the beginning of their lives, for the cause of freedom in wars, wherever they occurred on our planet earth - the pain and grief following their loss is almost tangible
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much Zanya, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Mary Shifman
I love this eloquent and poignant poem, Roy. The rhyme and imagery is excellent, but the message is beautifully voiced. This is a poem that I will read more than once.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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I love this eloquent and poignant poem, Roy. The rhyme and imagery is excellent, but the message is beautifully voiced. This is a poem that I will read more than once.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much Mary, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You are welcome.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Roy, your image of the cross with decaying person upon the cruel cross was hard to bear. Roy, with your perfect rhyming poem,tells us we not only mourn. We should not forget to remmber our heors who died for our country.
Gert
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Roy, your image of the cross with decaying person upon the cruel cross was hard to bear. Roy, with your perfect rhyming poem,tells us we not only mourn. We should not forget to remmber our heors who died for our country.
Gert
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much Gert, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You are so welcome Roy
Gert
Comment from RGstar
I didn't manage to write one for our heroes this year, so good to read one for the servicemen, as well from this perspective.
Well done.
Have a pleasant week.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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I didn't manage to write one for our heroes this year, so good to read one for the servicemen, as well from this perspective.
Well done.
Have a pleasant week.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much RG, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from estory
i think it was a great veterans day salute. You had the wonderful image of the crosses in the field that really conjures up all the pain and sense of loss, and you articulated those feelings of those left behind here, the wives and mothers, who are left with only these crosses, as memories of their loved ones who lived and breathed among us. estory
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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i think it was a great veterans day salute. You had the wonderful image of the crosses in the field that really conjures up all the pain and sense of loss, and you articulated those feelings of those left behind here, the wives and mothers, who are left with only these crosses, as memories of their loved ones who lived and breathed among us. estory
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from roof35
This is a bit of a tear jerker for me. The illustration you chose pairs perfectly with your words. In fact, it set the stage for your poem. Well written.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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This is a bit of a tear jerker for me. The illustration you chose pairs perfectly with your words. In fact, it set the stage for your poem. Well written.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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Thanks again for these super comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from MissMerri
Your ability to rhyme flawlessly verse after verse and never lose your perfect meter is remarkable to me Roy. This is such an appropriate poem, so sad but well deserved by the young and the brave. Thank you for remembering them.
In the line ... But cries still mutter in the trees
And fades (fade) not on the gentle breeze.., I think you have an s to delete on fade.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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Your ability to rhyme flawlessly verse after verse and never lose your perfect meter is remarkable to me Roy. This is such an appropriate poem, so sad but well deserved by the young and the brave. Thank you for remembering them.
In the line ... But cries still mutter in the trees
And fades (fade) not on the gentle breeze.., I think you have an s to delete on fade.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much Adonna, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
The brave men and women of the military should always be honoured for their sacrifice, and these military quotes are the perfect words. They risk their lives to protect our freedom, it is a selfless act of valour that is done without asking anything in return. You have penned another heartfelt poem. Words touch the reader's heart. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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The brave men and women of the military should always be honoured for their sacrifice, and these military quotes are the perfect words. They risk their lives to protect our freedom, it is a selfless act of valour that is done without asking anything in return. You have penned another heartfelt poem. Words touch the reader's heart. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much Seshardri, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Cindylou1
Roy, again you have blessed me with your heartfelt words in your poem. It is a needed reminder of all who sacrificed so much for others. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Blessings.
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Roy, again you have blessed me with your heartfelt words in your poem. It is a needed reminder of all who sacrificed so much for others. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Blessings.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much CindyLou, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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