Parisian Attraction
A 100-word contest entry11 total reviews
Comment from L. Kalere
How very romantic... a kiss with a stranger with the Eiffel Tower as a backdrop. Well written with believable (sort of) dialog. Is there hope for more meetings? Nice ending.
Linda
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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How very romantic... a kiss with a stranger with the Eiffel Tower as a backdrop. Well written with believable (sort of) dialog. Is there hope for more meetings? Nice ending.
Linda
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Ah, I will have to give the idea of "more meetings" some thought. Many thanks, Linda, for sharing my story. I am delighted you enjoyed it. Rod
Comment from Gert sherwood
RodG your 100-word contest entry
Parisian Attraction
You made your 100 words; sound like it happen; especially being in Paris. the well known as the place to find romance and been kissed by handsome Frenchmen
Best to you in the contest
Gert
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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RodG your 100-word contest entry
Parisian Attraction
You made your 100 words; sound like it happen; especially being in Paris. the well known as the place to find romance and been kissed by handsome Frenchmen
Best to you in the contest
Gert
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much, Gert, for taking the time to read and review my story. Rod
Comment from NaughtieScribe
OOOO, what happens next? This reads like the delicious prelude to a larger romance (I hope). I found nothing to adjust or tweak (except maybe the word count - ugh). Well Written, Well Done.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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OOOO, what happens next? This reads like the delicious prelude to a larger romance (I hope). I found nothing to adjust or tweak (except maybe the word count - ugh). Well Written, Well Done.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much, NaughtieScribe, for your review and encouragement to extend my story. I hate to dash your hopes, but I have no longer story in mind.
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I'm so pouting. lol
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 100 Word Dash writing prompt contest. You managed to tell a story in few sentences. It's a stunning and dramatic flash fiction in its entirety, though brief, compelling in structure and presentation.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Excellent entry for the 100 Word Dash writing prompt contest. You managed to tell a story in few sentences. It's a stunning and dramatic flash fiction in its entirety, though brief, compelling in structure and presentation.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much, Gypsy, for your high praise of my shortie.
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word story, Parisian Attraction, has the proper word count and gives another example of those wily Frenchmen.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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This one-hundred-word story, Parisian Attraction, has the proper word count and gives another example of those wily Frenchmen.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Thank you, Bill, for sharing my shortie and your review.
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
Well, I thought the writer was a mademoiselle but I was wrong. Nice background photo and nice words to match. I would also like to be in Paris to see the Eifel Tower and enjoy those watercolors. Thanks for sharing and all the very best in the contest, Kit.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Well, I thought the writer was a mademoiselle but I was wrong. Nice background photo and nice words to match. I would also like to be in Paris to see the Eifel Tower and enjoy those watercolors. Thanks for sharing and all the very best in the contest, Kit.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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You were not wrong, Kit. The narrator is a mademoiselle. Many thanks for sharing my story. I hope you can see the Eiffel Tower someday.
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Yes, I do hope so.
Comment from Wendy G
Well yes, those French men can be very romantic, and very smooth-talking! It is a well- written story with a perfect image for your words. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Well yes, those French men can be very romantic, and very smooth-talking! It is a well- written story with a perfect image for your words. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Indeed, Frenchmen have a romantic reputation. I am very pleased you enjoyed my story, Wendy.
Comment from oliver818
This is very funny, I can just imagine the scene. I have seen hundreds of artists in Paris, but not many I'd want to kiss unfortunately. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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This is very funny, I can just imagine the scene. I have seen hundreds of artists in Paris, but not many I'd want to kiss unfortunately. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 08-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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I am delighted you can imagine the scene and enjoyed my story?s humor. Many thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a great contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. You set the scene perfectly for the first kiss. Love the image your paired with your well thought out words.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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What a great contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. You set the scene perfectly for the first kiss. Love the image your paired with your well thought out words.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 08-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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I am delighted you enjoyed my shortie, Jan. Many thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Great job great picture words are lovely put together very well to me keep up the good work peace and love I sent to you stay creative and inspired keep writing
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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Great job great picture words are lovely put together very well to me keep up the good work peace and love I sent to you stay creative and inspired keep writing
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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Many thanks, Giftedone, for taking the time to read and review my story.
