Cat Laugh !
Farmhouse /story27 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a cute story. I guess Ginger had the last laugh when he shut Tommie outside. However, grandpa got shut out too. They made it through the storm and I bet it was scary. Tommie learned a lesson to not pull Ginger's tail ever again. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
This is a cute story. I guess Ginger had the last laugh when he shut Tommie outside. However, grandpa got shut out too. They made it through the storm and I bet it was scary. Tommie learned a lesson to not pull Ginger's tail ever again. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Cat Laugh! ', is an exceptionally well-written and entertaining piece. This talented writers story was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
'Cat Laugh! ', is an exceptionally well-written and entertaining piece. This talented writers story was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Thanks for that superb review zanya
zanya, you certainly deserved it.
Bless you and have great week,
the Duchess :)))
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A very charming and delightful story and a fun read.
The cat got the last laugh and revenge for the pulled tail.
Well done in the dialogue and bringing Tommie and grandpa to life.
Thank you for the enjoyable story.
Regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
A very charming and delightful story and a fun read.
The cat got the last laugh and revenge for the pulled tail.
Well done in the dialogue and bringing Tommie and grandpa to life.
Thank you for the enjoyable story.
Regards,
Mary
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Great review. Zanya
Comment from damommy
Hahahahaha! Good one. The cat got his own back on them for Tommy pulling his tail. How awful to be trapped outside in the coming storm. I really enjoyed reading this. It gave me a good laugh.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
Hahahahaha! Good one. The cat got his own back on them for Tommy pulling his tail. How awful to be trapped outside in the coming storm. I really enjoyed reading this. It gave me a good laugh.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this little tale! zanya
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Excellent! That could easily be a true story, cat's aren't a dumb as some people think. LOL. I can picture him sitting there, and it was probably the reason the door slammed shut! LOL. This has to be a winner, well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
Excellent! That could easily be a true story, cat's aren't a dumb as some people think. LOL. I can picture him sitting there, and it was probably the reason the door slammed shut! LOL. This has to be a winner, well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Great review zanya
Comment from dellsworthpoet
Betimes a bit of fate reminds us that instinct is more wise than thought.
A cute story. The pace is good. The images are clear. The characters are well-developed for so short of a piece. The flow is good. There is a twist at the end.
A nice read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
Betimes a bit of fate reminds us that instinct is more wise than thought.
A cute story. The pace is good. The images are clear. The characters are well-developed for so short of a piece. The flow is good. There is a twist at the end.
A nice read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Superb review zanya
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You are welcome.
Comment from RGstar
Lovely. I thought I would look in here Zanya. I was attracted to the image as having a cat myself.
I really liked this work. Warm and endearing...humorous to say the least.
I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Well done.
My best wishes.
Have a great week.
RGstar
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
Lovely. I thought I would look in here Zanya. I was attracted to the image as having a cat myself.
I really liked this work. Warm and endearing...humorous to say the least.
I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Well done.
My best wishes.
Have a great week.
RGstar
Comment Written 06-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Great review -glad you enjoyed reading it. zanya
Comment from Aspiring2Write
Hysterical, love it. Stories about cats are always a joy to read. The picture is great, really adds character to the story. Continue writing. I will love to see more.
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
Hysterical, love it. Stories about cats are always a joy to read. The picture is great, really adds character to the story. Continue writing. I will love to see more.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Great review zanya
Comment from Judy Lawless
So Ginger the cat outsmarted Tommie and Grandpa, slipping into the farm house just before the wind blew the door shut. Now if it knew how to unlock it! lol This is a really well-written and fun entry using the writing prompt. Good luck.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
So Ginger the cat outsmarted Tommie and Grandpa, slipping into the farm house just before the wind blew the door shut. Now if it knew how to unlock it! lol This is a really well-written and fun entry using the writing prompt. Good luck.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Great review zanya
Comment from Alaskastory
"Cat Laugh !" is a sweetly done story that will have general appeal with children. The illustration is adorable and such a perfect cartoon cat would be perfect throughout a children's book. Good luck on furthering effort with this one.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
"Cat Laugh !" is a sweetly done story that will have general appeal with children. The illustration is adorable and such a perfect cartoon cat would be perfect throughout a children's book. Good luck on furthering effort with this one.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Great review & interesting idea about a childrens' story ! zanya