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Sunday

All about Sunday

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Comment from moongirlwriter
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Nicely done. . .for every Sunday. This poem has much to say about Sunday but the rhyming feels a bit forced. This poem reminds me of my youth, it's how I grew up to experience life. Looking at the world today, I think we got it right. :) Young people today are missing out.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2021

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2021
    Rhyming is not forced. Thanks.
reply by moongirlwriter on 01-Nov-2021
    okay. . .so happy it flows well for you.
    I do so love the strong foundation the poem implies. :)
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2021
    :)
Comment from T B Botts
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What a fine poem about Sunday. I think you covered it all pretty much.
I fear that so many people in this country have given up on going to church, and as old fashioned as it might seem to some, not going has left us in the shape we're in, at least in part, in this country.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
    I will.
Comment from Paul McFarland
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A good description of Sunday. You left out NFL football, and you have an extra line in the second stanza. Get rid of that extra line, and you might do something in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
    I didn't want to write about the NFL.