Winter Morning
Grandpa loves his herd.4 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
You creatively put together a piece of time in your 5-7-5, using great imagery. Although the overall presentation gives me a feel of blistery cold weather, I feel warmth in my heart because the gentleman sacrifices his own warmth as he loves his cattle and goes out into the cold to feed them.
Great job!
Gale
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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You creatively put together a piece of time in your 5-7-5, using great imagery. Although the overall presentation gives me a feel of blistery cold weather, I feel warmth in my heart because the gentleman sacrifices his own warmth as he loves his cattle and goes out into the cold to feed them.
Great job!
Gale
Comment Written 02-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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Thank you for your read and review. Pleased that you picked up on the feeling of winter cold.
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Brrrrr ... I don't like cold. Hurts my old bones :)
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of the poem reminisces a relay race from a harsh snow season to a warmer one that affords the herder less difficulty to gather fodder for his flock.
Typical of a Haiku, the work highlights the prevailing seasonal outlook;with it's traditional three lines and 5-7-5 syllables count.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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The objective correlative of the poem reminisces a relay race from a harsh snow season to a warmer one that affords the herder less difficulty to gather fodder for his flock.
Typical of a Haiku, the work highlights the prevailing seasonal outlook;with it's traditional three lines and 5-7-5 syllables count.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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Thanks much for the read and review. Greatly appreciated.
Comment from RodG
I enjoyed this novel 5-7-5 poem because I know so little about farming in the winter. I appreciate the photo included which SHOWS how "Grandpa brings them hay" after a blizzard.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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I enjoyed this novel 5-7-5 poem because I know so little about farming in the winter. I appreciate the photo included which SHOWS how "Grandpa brings them hay" after a blizzard.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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Thanks much for the read and review. The farming life would not be my choice, but I'm happy there are those who do it. Feedback greatly appreciated.
Comment from Pangalactic
Very vivid visuals with your great 5-7-5 piece here. I love the picture. There's a place close to the surface for all, or most, of us that remembers our pastoral roots. I can smell the hay :)
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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Very vivid visuals with your great 5-7-5 piece here. I love the picture. There's a place close to the surface for all, or most, of us that remembers our pastoral roots. I can smell the hay :)
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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Thanks much for the read and review. The farming life would not be my choice, but I'm happy there are those who do it. Feedback greatly appreciated. Pleased you caught the scent.
