I'm Becoming a Bore
With all habits, we need to know when enough is enough.12 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Have you been inside my head? Lol. Very humorous. Very well written. A great fun poem with good rhythm and rhyme, and I am sure that many will identify with this. Very best wishes for your entry!
Wendy
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Have you been inside my head? Lol. Very humorous. Very well written. A great fun poem with good rhythm and rhyme, and I am sure that many will identify with this. Very best wishes for your entry!
Wendy
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Thanks for your lovely review, Wendy.
Comment from SimianSavant
After much debate, I hate to say that I relate and really must resist the bait and break this trait, before it becomes a habit. Nice work on this piece.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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After much debate, I hate to say that I relate and really must resist the bait and break this trait, before it becomes a habit. Nice work on this piece.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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haha... thanks for entering into the spirit of my poem with your rhyming review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is a fun write about the Fanstory obsession and I enjoyed the alliteration here in this clever and entertaining write, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Ha ha ha, this is a fun write about the Fanstory obsession and I enjoyed the alliteration here in this clever and entertaining write, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Thanks, Dolly. You seem to have the obsession as well.
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Yessss!
Comment from Mama Baer
Hurrah, hurrah! Oh my gosh, I can relate so very much!! Since I found FanStory, my other addictions have slipped, hehe! Love this adorable rendition of something we have in common! So well done! Love it!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Hurrah, hurrah! Oh my gosh, I can relate so very much!! Since I found FanStory, my other addictions have slipped, hehe! Love this adorable rendition of something we have in common! So well done! Love it!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Haha... our other addictions have to get in the queue behind FanStory.
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So true. And I should have known you were the mystery writer! So good.
Comment from Paul McFarland
You have indicated that FanStory has control of your life. I know what you mean.
My eyes are glued to this display.
I'm at this desk most every day.
With rhyme and meter, I must play.
My wife says she will run away
If I don't change without delay.
What can I do to make her stay?
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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You have indicated that FanStory has control of your life. I know what you mean.
My eyes are glued to this display.
I'm at this desk most every day.
With rhyme and meter, I must play.
My wife says she will run away
If I don't change without delay.
What can I do to make her stay?
Comment Written 27-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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You are too keen!
Turn off the screen
and spend some time
NOT making rhyme.
If you really love your lass
you must get up off your ass.
Comment from tfawcus
Such a delight trying to work out who has written this. I've narrowed it down to two or three but will have to wait until the winner is announced to find out. Great entertainment, artfully phrased, and altogether worth a phantom sixth star.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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Such a delight trying to work out who has written this. I've narrowed it down to two or three but will have to wait until the winner is announced to find out. Great entertainment, artfully phrased, and altogether worth a phantom sixth star.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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Well, I hope I head the list of people who write like me! Thanks for reviewing, Tony, and the mention of a 6th star.
Comment from Mary Shifman
Well, I love your poem and I know exactly how you feel. I've never belonged to a group that I just can't seem to stay away from before FanStory. I feel as if I've been looking for this place for years. Great job putting it in a poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Well, I love your poem and I know exactly how you feel. I've never belonged to a group that I just can't seem to stay away from before FanStory. I feel as if I've been looking for this place for years. Great job putting it in a poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Thanks for your review. We share the same response to FanStory and its impact on our desire to keep writing.
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You are welcome.
Comment from RodG
You can almost see this writer at the keyboard writing poetry with a frenzy. Your format is indeed overloaded with rhymes and you prattle on, but you are no bore and I was entertained. Rod
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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You can almost see this writer at the keyboard writing poetry with a frenzy. Your format is indeed overloaded with rhymes and you prattle on, but you are no bore and I was entertained. Rod
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thanks, Rod! The train of thought got up a head of steam and ran away on me.
Comment from bhogg
Such a cute post! Great to read with a great rhyme scheme, but a 'story' that many of us know so well. I've gotten out of FS a couple of times, but keep coming back. Of course a large part of that is the people...
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Such a cute post! Great to read with a great rhyme scheme, but a 'story' that many of us know so well. I've gotten out of FS a couple of times, but keep coming back. Of course a large part of that is the people...
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thanks for reviewing - it seems that a lot of members get bitten by the bug and keep coming back.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
This is what I should have written about! I sit here all day doing one thing or the other...trying to earn dollars, trying to think what to write..I never worked this earnestly at a job! WAIT - this is a job!!
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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This is what I should have written about! I sit here all day doing one thing or the other...trying to earn dollars, trying to think what to write..I never worked this earnestly at a job! WAIT - this is a job!!
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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You are right Sherry - FS is very compulsive, more like a job than mere recreation... and we work for peanuts!
