Robert's Halloween Party
Fifty Second in the Robert's Adventures Series.8 total reviews
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Aww, this is a nicely composed poem with a sweet ending.
It rhymes well and tells a good story, step by step, as to the
halloween party Robert Marcus Fredrick Dune was preparing
for. I like the descriptive nature of this poem from decorations
to food to costumes. Well done. I enjoyed reading this
entertaining piece.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Aww, this is a nicely composed poem with a sweet ending.
It rhymes well and tells a good story, step by step, as to the
halloween party Robert Marcus Fredrick Dune was preparing
for. I like the descriptive nature of this poem from decorations
to food to costumes. Well done. I enjoyed reading this
entertaining piece.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much. I started off entering a FanStory contest to write a children's poem and 52 Robert poems later....here I am. :) Thanks again.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
BN, will you please tell me your first name again?
Anyway, your poem is an exceptional description of Halloween. I love it!
Excellent rhyme, framing a sweet story.
Best wishes for the contest!
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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BN, will you please tell me your first name again?
Anyway, your poem is an exceptional description of Halloween. I love it!
Excellent rhyme, framing a sweet story.
Best wishes for the contest!
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 27-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review, you are so kind. My name is Sharon when I'm not being boogienights. I really appreciate you. :)
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Hi, Sharon,
You write excellent poetry. I love the rhyme and texture of it. Please send more to me, because I don?t get it in my inbox often.
Congratulations on all the awards you have won so far.
Health and best wishes,
Cindy
Comment from robyn corum
BN,
What a fun little poem about a family and how they celebrate the wickedest holiday of the year. This was a homey, comfy story in a poem and in that way, it was quite different than the normal Halloween fare. I liked it! I especially liked that the whole family worked together and big brother helped little sister. What a cool message. Thanks!
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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BN,
What a fun little poem about a family and how they celebrate the wickedest holiday of the year. This was a homey, comfy story in a poem and in that way, it was quite different than the normal Halloween fare. I liked it! I especially liked that the whole family worked together and big brother helped little sister. What a cool message. Thanks!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this great review, just one of many Robert adventures.. :)
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a charming Halloween poem and I enjoyed it. It rhymes nicely and has lots of colorful imagery. I liked the way you repeated Robert's name as the fist line of every stanza. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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This is a charming Halloween poem and I enjoyed it. It rhymes nicely and has lots of colorful imagery. I liked the way you repeated Robert's name as the fist line of every stanza. Nicely done.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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Thank you, I appreciate you reading my Robert poem. :)
Comment from Gert sherwood
Boogienights
Your Fifty Second in the Robert's Adventures Series.
Robert's Halloween party is going to be so much fun. and think of a the neat outfits there will be fun fun games. And--
Gummy eyeballs were dropped into spooky punch,
smores bars, cupcakes, popcorn balls they could munch.
Gert
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Boogienights
Your Fifty Second in the Robert's Adventures Series.
Robert's Halloween party is going to be so much fun. and think of a the neat outfits there will be fun fun games. And--
Gummy eyeballs were dropped into spooky punch,
smores bars, cupcakes, popcorn balls they could munch.
Gert
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thank you for reading about Robert, I'm glad you liked it. :)
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Boogienights
You are most welcome
Gert
Comment from Modee
Robert Marcus Fredrick Dune sounds like a pretty cool kid. This poem kinda had a beat to it - my head was rockin' back and forth as I read 'Robert Marcus Fredrick Dune' and on to the next line. Coolness.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Robert Marcus Fredrick Dune sounds like a pretty cool kid. This poem kinda had a beat to it - my head was rockin' back and forth as I read 'Robert Marcus Fredrick Dune' and on to the next line. Coolness.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thanks for reading. I've written 51 other Robert poems if you'd like to read some of those. I really appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I really enjoyed reading this.
I love the fun and innocent aspect of halloween so much more than the sinister and creepy side!
Your story telling is lovely and the theme is sweet and wholesome. The excitement of preparing for a halloween party and then the enjoyment of it. I especially love the last couple of lines of the poem. It made me nostalgic for the time when my kids were that age :)
Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes, Debra
For consideration: Robert's surname is missing capitalisation in stanza 2 ;)
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Hello :)
I really enjoyed reading this.
I love the fun and innocent aspect of halloween so much more than the sinister and creepy side!
Your story telling is lovely and the theme is sweet and wholesome. The excitement of preparing for a halloween party and then the enjoyment of it. I especially love the last couple of lines of the poem. It made me nostalgic for the time when my kids were that age :)
Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes, Debra
For consideration: Robert's surname is missing capitalisation in stanza 2 ;)
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this great review and for pointing out my error...I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Mama Baer
Oh, Sharon--another masterpiece! You have a gift for delightful children's poetry. I always look forward to a message in my inbox that you just posted a new poem! Your words paint wonderful imagery of a happy family enjoying the best parts of Halloween. Thank you!!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Oh, Sharon--another masterpiece! You have a gift for delightful children's poetry. I always look forward to a message in my inbox that you just posted a new poem! Your words paint wonderful imagery of a happy family enjoying the best parts of Halloween. Thank you!!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thank you, that's very nice of you..I'm so excited that you like it and I truly appreciate the six stars. :)
