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Grieving Hearts

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My sad Heart emoting @utilizing it's 'Heart-Brain'

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Comment from country ranch writer
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So good of you to keep your stories going in doing so you have helped so many and I know in my heart he is looking down on you so proud of keeping the life line going.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
    Somebody's got to keep the fires burning?
    The kiln cooking.
    And, the oven's baking!
    Why?
    Too much dough don't you know?
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
    "Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"
reply by country ranch writer on 27-Oct-2021
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Comment from -Joy-
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Ricky, this is incredible work. You did a wonderful job keeping the conversation(s) interesting, while not diverting away from the idea. I would definitely recommend you consider speech writing. I can see that one of your major strengths is the 'conversation' component and draw of writing. I can see you achieving great success in duo speech writing along with, humorous interpretation and dramatic interpretation. It would also be possible for you to write about past/future/present experiences - if you are comfortable - for speakers to perform. Wishing you luck for the future, continue the great work!

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
    Thanks again for your review.
    I am a children's author and also a novelist a Slam Poet of Laureate and a poet of Laureate.
    I'm also a songwriter and artist singer and dancer.
    And much more.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
    "Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"
Comment from kahpot
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What a sad though beautiful read, sad because it takes a life to save a life yet beautiful because a life is saved, thank you for the ongoing notes, very well done and the artwork is perfect****kahpot

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
    Thanks Kahpot
    Always a pleasure to see you reviewing the work.
    Doctor Ricky 1024