Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Brilliant metaphor of capturing moments and canning them as if they were sweet preserves to savor when we need spiritual sustenance. Clever play.

Per your note--you got it right as to eternity being timeless.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Liz, for these great comments and.excellent review, blessings Roy

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Amazing, I ponder the same but know and understand what Jesus said we would be after leaving our bodies. One can only imagine. Good one, Bro. Blessings

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 Comment Written 22-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021

Thanks Ben. for these fantastic comments and.review, blessings Roy

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I have enjoyed reading your poem. It is interesting and unique. A different kind of poetry. I like how you structured it. Excellent work! No mistakes. Thank you for sharing!

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 Comment Written 22-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021

Thanks Raul, for these lovely comments and.review, blessings Roy