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Moments

A ballad

23 total reviews 
Comment from robyn corum
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Roy,

Don't you think that may be part of the reason God kindly gave us the gift of memories? That way we can bask in the good times when things are less than perfect - or remember moments with loved ones long after they have departed. He is good and kind. He has granted us all we need on this earth. Thanks!

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Robyn, for these thoughtful comments and empathetic review, blessings Roy
Comment from aryr
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The picture was a gentle reminder of Moses, Roy. I enjoyed your words that made perfect sense as I read them. It made me remember the words of God when he spoke to our ancestors and when he speaks to us. You did very well with this and it was greatly enjoyed. Each line flowed into the next.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much for these thoughtful comments and empathetic review, blessings Roy
reply by aryr on 25-Oct-2021
    most welcome, Roy, blessings.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I feel 'eternity' is something each of us must have faith in. If we don't, then we miss the understanding of our Heavenly Father's desire for us. Thank you for sharing your poem and thoughts.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Barbara, for these thoughtful comments and empathetic review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sherry Asbury
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Dearest Prophet, I love when you gift us with poems like this. It makes heaven and eternity, Gog the Father and Jesus the son - and most of all the Holy Ghost of the Trinity who will envelop us with loving arms one day.
Gone will be all our ills. I will look for you when I get there...

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
    Thanks Sherry for these fantastic comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Cindylou1
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Time is an interesting thing. I have often thought about how God has no beginning or ending. Time is one of the mysteries of the universe. Your poem is something to ponder and enjoy. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
    Thanks Cindylou, for these super comments and fabulous review, blessings Roy
Comment from Chrissy710
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Hi Roy I love the many ways you write about your faith and commitment to you convictions
Always written in metered rhyme that have messages to ponder ( even me ha ha)
Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Chris, for these great comments and.excellent review, blessings Roy
Comment from Wendy G
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Eternity and infinity are concepts too big to grasp. It is hard to understand the absence of time while we are still human. Your poem is a thoughtful one, and sets the reader pondering about the keeping of special moments - and the relief they can provide during difficult times. Well written.
Wendy

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
    Thanks Wendy, for these super comments and.review, blessings Roy
Comment from Mama Baer
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Another beautiful piece, Roy. What a wonderful thought, to capture the best moments and feelings in a jar. I have been processing homemade grape juice this week, so this imagery was very poignant to me! Sometimes, the concept of eternity frightens me. Yet, I cannot fathom life stopping. Your piece gives me hope. Lovely.
-Shaunna

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Shauna, for these great comments and.excellent review, blessings Roy
Comment from karenina
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The greater question remains a mystery to me. Your poem, however, speaks to the importance of embracing every blessed moment! Jim Crowd's song "Time in a Bottle" came to mind... I always loved that tune.

Karenina

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Karen, for these great comments and.excellent review, blessings Roy
reply by karenina on 23-Oct-2021
    Have a nice weekend!

    Karenina
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
    You too Karen
Comment from Henry White II
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OK. I could be wrong. But I am reading this as you being a believer. At first I thought this was speaking about living in the present moment. But at by the end, I was thinking it was referring to eternal life. Another well written poem. Good job.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
    Thanks Henry, (you got it right) thanks for these great comments and.excellent review, blessings Roy Thanks so much for these great comments and.excellent review, blessings Roy