Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

This is an excellent poem for the contest. I enjoyed the balance between the good characteristics expressed versus the evaluation of what the writer considers to be flaws; a wonderful, honest self-evaluation that, with such a positive attitude, gives birth to improvement. I very much enjoyed the rhyme, rhythm and the unbroken stanzas.
Beautifully expressed.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021

Thank you for your positive feedback. It is very much appreciated. Have a wonderful day. Cheers

reply by C. Gale Burnett on 26-Oct-2021

You are so very welcome!

Comment from Andrew Lunn

Excellent

I really enjoyed the honesty of the piece and how you recognized both the positive and negative sides of yourself. I think some language with a bit more depth would have pushed it to 6 stars but it flows nicely and I really enjoyed reading this.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021

Thanks Andrew for your comments. I appreciate your feedback and will have another look at it seek improvements. Cheers

Comment from T B Botts

Excellent

What a delightful poem to read. I loved all the attributes you listed. You sound darn near perfect anyway. The ending was unexpected but wonderful to read. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Tom

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021

Thanks Tom for your lovely words and blessings.

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

This was a surprise and very clever. I wonder who knows us best - us or them? I think I know me, but fall short of glory lots of times. This is a really fine write!

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2021

Thank you Sherry for your positive words. It is an interesting question. Cheers