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Moving Onward

The future is in our hands

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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Wise words, my friend. We mustn't let this give in to what is going on today. Together we can pull through. I like your optimism, Jay, you are inspirational. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2021

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Timely lament--I admire your wise words of admonition, as well as your optimism in the face of these times of contention. Poignant remembrance of those who fought for freedom.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2021

Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I continue to to pray. I am not about to give up our freedoms that so many people men/women have died for. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I enjoyed reading.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2021

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
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Your poems are full of wisdom you have earned over the years and are passing on to us. What a wonderful gesture! This is a well written sonnet about remembering all those who fought for our way of life. Freedom is our birthright, however many people become enslaved by the life of mediocrity. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2021

Comment from dragonpoet
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This is a well written sonnet about remembering all those who fought for our way of life. We must be thankful and keep fighting for it to die without regret
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2021

Comment from Boogienights
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Thank you for this encouraging poem and your positive message. I agree that things will straighten out eventually, but right now the whole thing makes me sad. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2021

Comment from Senyai
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Hi Jay,

This is indeed one of your best yet! Your words are succinct and wise. Will you be 97 years old in 2022? Unbelievable! My hat's off to you, sir! I hope you don't mind my commenting on that.

Yes, may we keep standing up for freedom as it is not free and we must protect it with everything we have or we will lose it all and we and our children and future posterity will suffer.

Have a wonderful weekend, Jay :))
Senyai

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2021

Comment from Mia Twysted
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Remind the people what it cost to be free. Encourage them to make sure that those freedoms that were fought for are not taken away. Very encouraging piece.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2021

Comment from amahra
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Thank you for posting and encouraging your readers. This is indeed a messy world we're in, but America will rise above it. People like yourself who fought for this country will not be disappointed. I have full faith in God and the patriots.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2021

Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for your encouragement, Jaybird! And thank you for serving in the War to help our country. May the Lord bless and keep this country safe and free from those who try to destroy it with lies.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2021