Comment from Terry Broxson

Good

A good entry for the contest, good luck. I really like the line Laughing like a child, I tickle the face of God. Great imagery. The only reason I rate 4 stars instead of 5 is that I wish it was longer. You have some good stuff going here, and I thought you ended it a little quick, but still a good job.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021

thanks for the review

Comment from SoulRiver

Excellent

I loved the imagery in the poem. I liked the idea of your writing taking flight and being totally free. I especially like the line about causing God to chuckle. The whole message was so light, playful and full of mirth. Good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021

Thanks so much for your thoughtful review.

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Glorious! This would also work well in a faith contest--a fresh and exuberant view of God and the freedom to soar--a fine example of "flouting the rules"--charming whimsy!

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2021

Thank you so much, I enjoyed wrriting it.

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

A delightful poem, charged with energy and light. It brought me to a good mood, I enjoyed your dancing lines, imagery, visuals and presentation.

Much enjoyed, good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2021

Thanks so much, I enjoyed writing it.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lovely spiritual poem - I like how you send the poem flying and the soaring to "tickle the Face of God" makes me think of how our words should be written to give Him glory. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021

Thanks very much, God bless you.

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

You have put a lot into these five lines. Tickling the face of God is a unique phrase, and His response is great. What do you think about changing "hemisphere" to "biosphere"?

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021

Thanks, Paul. your review means a lot.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Isn't it amazing? That no matter what we do, or who we are, Jesus would have still given up His life for us. And I guess we are something akin to a child, God still derives joy from us, like a good parents, great job, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021

Thanks dear Roy hope you are well God Bless,

reply by royowen on 21-Oct-2021

Thank you Laurel

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

Hi, Laura. A joyful spirit pervades your poem and not just because of the liberation of free verse; the piece also delves into the great joy brought by a strong faith in God.

The daring imagination to tickle the face of God (what poetry critics would call a 'conceit') sends this piece into a lofty stratosphere indeed.

Steve

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021

Thanks Steve, Your thoughtful review is greatly appreciated.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

These are fine faithful words of appreciation, a fanciful flirtation of life soaring high and enjoying the freedom life brings, I floated along with your words here and enjoyed the ride, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021

Aww, thanks Dolly, glad to see you, hope you are well.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This Spiritual, No Rules Poetry Contest contest entry speaks about free flight, the heavens declare his glory, your poem can fly, like colourful ribbons floating on the four winds, unbound, God's everlasting love surrounds me; well said, well done; thanks for sharing, happy reviewing this; God Bless you, my good writer, post more, dear. October, Festive, Flood Fearing, Watery Month Here! ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021

Thank you so much for your kind review, I hope you are well my friend.