Comment from Janetsue

Excellent

What an exciting Thanksgiving Day arrival. Welcoming a child into the world on such a wonderful holiday is truly a special thing. I am aware that Canadians celebrate an earlier Thanksgiving Day than we do down here in the States. This is an excellent entry for the contest...and congratulations on the new baby!

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Thanks so much. It was an amazing experience.

Comment from Cristine22

Excellent

What a wonderful experience to be present at the birth of your grandchild at home! Congratulations!

Your writing is both succinct and meaningful. Great job showing us this experience with so few words!

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Thanks for your thoughtful review.

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

I really enjoyed this story, it is so uplifting. What a wonderful Thanksgiving for your family. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Thanks so much for your review and kind words.

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

Now that's what I call a Thanksgiving miracle. I bet the dinner was full of thankfulness. What a wonderfully written story.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Thanks, Mike, you are right we are so thankful.

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

A nice entry for true story flash.yes if was very bravdvof them to attempt at home
Anyway on Halloween day they were blessed with a son .all the best for the contest

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Thanks for your review.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Congrats a child that came into this world on a very special day, may his life be full of joy and happiness. Thank you fo r sharing and good luck with your writings,

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Thank you Iza

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

The experience of watching and assisting with the birth of your grandson must have been exhilarating and a memory you will always cherish. The baby's eyes in the picture are amazing. It looks as if he realizes and is grateful for you bringing him into the world. He looks as if he has already bonded with his grandmother. May you and your family be blessed.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Thank you very much

Comment from dellsworthpoet

Excellent

A moving story. The pace is good. The anticipation is built in. The images are clear. The dialogue is believable. The flow is consistent.

A good read. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Thank you for your review.

reply by dellsworthpoet on 29-Oct-2021

You are welcome.

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

What a nice story about one of the most momentous times in life. Being a nurse must have made it scarier because you know what all could go wrong. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Carol.

Comment from Terry Broxson

Excellent

The image you paint is planted in my mind's eye. We never had kids, but this is a great story. I also like his name, Hawkly, how cool is that? Good luck in the contest. Good job.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021

Thanks for your thoughtful review!