Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-I don't think you are
being too harsh, but as
with everything there are some
who fit the description, some are
better, and some are worse!
-I think you capture the nature
of some of the speeches and
the ads that take up our air waves!
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021

Thanks for reviewing zanya

reply by Pam (respa) on 07-Dec-2021

You are welcome.

Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

No, I think you were being too nice, not too harsh (LOL). You've written a wonderful Political Senryu for the writing prompt. I bet you wish you could have written more.
Well done!

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021

Thanks for reviewing zanya