Politics USA: Same Old Story
Political commentary9 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
To compromise is the best way to get through some of these problems. The parties who put on the boxing gloves, need to sit down and talk instead of getting into a match.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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To compromise is the best way to get through some of these problems. The parties who put on the boxing gloves, need to sit down and talk instead of getting into a match.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Rosemary. I appreciate your taking the time to review my poem and express your own views.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello,
Interesting senryu entry for the Political Senryu writing prompt contest. Good syllables count. The connection between lines can be improved. The ending (satori) is supposed to be an aha! moment.
Good luck
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Hello,
Interesting senryu entry for the Political Senryu writing prompt contest. Good syllables count. The connection between lines can be improved. The ending (satori) is supposed to be an aha! moment.
Good luck
Comment Written 20-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much, Gypsy, for reviewing my Senryu and clarifying its structure.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Very true. Because of hate that's getting done is fighting. It's taken eight months for Biden to totally wreck America. All he is doing is everything he can to take every good thing that Trump did away and replace it with empty air. I hope those Trump haters are seeing what they've done. But then, it isn't their fault since no one will ever convince me that Biden won fair and square.
Patty
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Very true. Because of hate that's getting done is fighting. It's taken eight months for Biden to totally wreck America. All he is doing is everything he can to take every good thing that Trump did away and replace it with empty air. I hope those Trump haters are seeing what they've done. But then, it isn't their fault since no one will ever convince me that Biden won fair and square.
Patty
Comment Written 20-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Patty, for taking the time to review my poem and express your own views.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is what I hate most about politics, the back stabbing! Here in Britain whenever the Conservative party (Republican) do something to help the people, the labour party (democrat) complain, mainly because they did not think of it first! The squabbling does not help the Nation to get on its feet! Much enjoyed, poignant words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2021
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This is what I hate most about politics, the back stabbing! Here in Britain whenever the Conservative party (Republican) do something to help the people, the labour party (democrat) complain, mainly because they did not think of it first! The squabbling does not help the Nation to get on its feet! Much enjoyed, poignant words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Dolly. This political squabbling is universal. My sister complains about it in Canada.
Comment from L. Kalere
You've captured the sad state of politics . Perhaps moving to a boxing ring would be more civilized. Nicely written, succinct political commentary.
Linda
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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You've captured the sad state of politics . Perhaps moving to a boxing ring would be more civilized. Nicely written, succinct political commentary.
Linda
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much, Linda, for your review and kind praise.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Too many egos and self-serving interests. You've created a great Political Senryu 5-7-5 for the contest. Loved the presentation and your thoughts. Great job!
Gale
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Too many egos and self-serving interests. You've created a great Political Senryu 5-7-5 for the contest. Loved the presentation and your thoughts. Great job!
Gale
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Gale, for your review and kind praise.
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You are welcome :)
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Okay I can dig it thank you again for sharing this short piece it was very good it should do very well in the contest have a beautiful day thanks again for sharing
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Okay I can dig it thank you again for sharing this short piece it was very good it should do very well in the contest have a beautiful day thanks again for sharing
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much for sharing my poem and your review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I agree--each has their own agenda once elected. Good job on your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your syllables are correct per line, the image is perfect, and your message is clear.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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I agree--each has their own agenda once elected. Good job on your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your syllables are correct per line, the image is perfect, and your message is clear.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much, Jan, for your praise and best wishes.
Comment from royowen
It's a real problem when our country's leaders can't even set an example, but not only that, but by their behaviour actually seem to endorse it, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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It's a real problem when our country's leaders can't even set an example, but not only that, but by their behaviour actually seem to endorse it, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Roy, for sharing my poem and your praise.
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Good job
