Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Aaaaahh...there is a lovely feeling in your words. Dancing near a lake on a pier brings forth good feelings. Your words fit the picture perfectly. Excellent use of words and a smooth poetic form.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021

Thanks for your concise, yet thorough review, mermaids.
dragonpoet

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

This is beautiful and romantic, and your picture pairs well with your words. I do believe we all have music inside of our souls and we all need to dance. Thank you for sharing. :)

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021

Thanks for your nice review, Booginights.
dragonpoet

Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

Well, Joan, this is quite the ekphrastic poem you've got I can imagine the swaying to the music as I read this piece, it is engaging and inviting me to dance! To eternal music of our souls, is an excellent ending, I applaud your joining in the fun! The "picture this" must be loads of fun and enjoyment for you and others who belong!
Take care, my friend,
Jesse

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I am glad you enjoyed it. I really like the picture this club. I have been a member for a couple of years now. I also like writing poems from lists of given words.
Joan

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

I really like this very short poem. It describes the picture so well and creates a very atmospheric scene. Well done. All the best. Jen.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021

Thank you very much, Jen, for your kind words about my poem.
Joan

Comment from lauralumummu

Excellent

Very nice, the picture suits the lovely words. Romantic and sweet. I wish listening or floating were in there somewhere, just me perhaps. All the best, Laura

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021

Laura,
Thanks for the review and possible editing aids.
Joan

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

A beautiful illustration is paired with your club entry. One easily imagines this scene. Not quite sure if 'of' is the best choice: music in..., music for...?

Not a fan of initial caps for short poems, but if you insist, then include a period following your last line. Consider increasing your font size. IMHO it will add a punch to your presentation.

Mark

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021

Thanks for your review and editing help, Mark.
I will check out the use 'of'.
Joan

Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

This is quite lovely. The picture is soft and romantic. The imagery evoked by your words is quite vivid. I can see this couple waltzing through life until the their days. Nice job.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021

Thanks for the positive comments and high rating. I appreciate both.
dp

reply by Mary Shifman on 24-Oct-2021

You are welcome.

reply by Mary Shifman on 25-Oct-2021

You are welcome.

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent

It's quite likely that you associate a certain type of song with all the different phases in your life. There may be dozens of songs that bring back wonderfully joyful memories but also songs that remind you about heartbreaking moments.I like this short romantic poem. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021

Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem, Sshardri
Joan

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Magical words here of cheer and happiness and if we can still hold such magic inside us after years of being with one person, then we have definitely found our soul mate, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021

Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem, Dolly. I appreciate all the stars.
Joan

Comment from Hitcher

Excellent

It is becoming a bit of a dying art, romantic, hold each other close, real close eloquent dancing. It is beautiful to watch and even better if one has the skills to do : )) An excellent, imaginative fusion of poetry and picture, well done!

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021

Thanks, Hitcher, for your kind and encouraging words. And for all the stars.
Joan