Some Things That Make Me Happy
Things that make me happy33 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This What Makes Me Happy writing prompt entry speaks simply in a free flow of good thoughts about what makes the poet happy, the list of things and actions is well said, well done; thank you for this, happy to review this; God Bless you, my dear good writer, wish read more. ALCREATOR, October, Festive Month...
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
This What Makes Me Happy writing prompt entry speaks simply in a free flow of good thoughts about what makes the poet happy, the list of things and actions is well said, well done; thank you for this, happy to review this; God Bless you, my dear good writer, wish read more. ALCREATOR, October, Festive Month...
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the review. Coulda, woulda, shoulda done more.
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
I love the underlying current of humour in the way you present your choices of what makes you happy.
I certainly identify with the things that make you happy.
I like the almost jaunty rhythm of the poem and the perfect rhyme.
An enjoyable read.
Warmly,
Juliette
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
I love the underlying current of humour in the way you present your choices of what makes you happy.
I certainly identify with the things that make you happy.
I like the almost jaunty rhythm of the poem and the perfect rhyme.
An enjoyable read.
Warmly,
Juliette
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Juliette. Hope you have a long list.
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A nice poem. The rhyme scheme is good. The list is normal things which makes it special. The language is conversational and warm.
Suggestions:
For things that make me happy,
The word choice for doesn't seem to fit. Perhaps these ore some would work better.
A nice read. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
A nice poem. The rhyme scheme is good. The list is normal things which makes it special. The language is conversational and warm.
Suggestions:
For things that make me happy,
The word choice for doesn't seem to fit. Perhaps these ore some would work better.
A nice read. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the review. I think you are right about the word choice. I'm going to take another look.
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You are welcome.