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Comment from Eunice Amero
Now anyone who can go to outter space has no nerves at all. This is a good story. You did a good job. You must know more than l know about going into space to write about it. Keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Now anyone who can go to outter space has no nerves at all. This is a good story. You did a good job. You must know more than l know about going into space to write about it. Keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much Eunice and I'm happy to see you enjoyed my outer space journey!
Doctor Ricky
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Yes. You are welcome.
Comment from Frank Ball
One place that needs correction is where you used "are" when you meant "our". It troubles me to pick on your work but there is difficulty with the logic here and there. To wit:
A shooting star is another name for a meteor which only becomes a meteor when it pierces our atmosphere. The asteroid might be used as a towtruck but don't call it a meteor or a shooting star.
There are many trajectories a lassoed space object might take you but the vast majority are wrong.
112 km seems awfully specific to be classified as "approximately".
The travels in the story seem to be within our solar system. the statement that some product might be available elsewhere in the Milky Way Galaxy seems out of place because the travelers would not live long enough to get there.
Quite a lot of license is needed by this kind of story but what is required here is an uncomfortable stretch.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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One place that needs correction is where you used "are" when you meant "our". It troubles me to pick on your work but there is difficulty with the logic here and there. To wit:
A shooting star is another name for a meteor which only becomes a meteor when it pierces our atmosphere. The asteroid might be used as a towtruck but don't call it a meteor or a shooting star.
There are many trajectories a lassoed space object might take you but the vast majority are wrong.
112 km seems awfully specific to be classified as "approximately".
The travels in the story seem to be within our solar system. the statement that some product might be available elsewhere in the Milky Way Galaxy seems out of place because the travelers would not live long enough to get there.
Quite a lot of license is needed by this kind of story but what is required here is an uncomfortable stretch.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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We are right in our own unique ways whether or not they're accepted is the choice of the reviewer.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky
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