Wonder Years
Sedoka 5/7/7 5/7/714 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Yes I can remember those "wondrous" years, everything was new and so fascinating. I can remember the stories too, that was marvellous too. Beautifully written dear Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Yes I can remember those "wondrous" years, everything was new and so fascinating. I can remember the stories too, that was marvellous too. Beautifully written dear Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful review and feedback.
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Most welcome
Comment from lyenochka
It's a joy to have that childlike wonder! And there are so many things to wonder at if we take the time. And children do have more time to admire nature. Enjoyed your sedoka poem! I guess this might have been inspired by Atticus!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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It's a joy to have that childlike wonder! And there are so many things to wonder at if we take the time. And children do have more time to admire nature. Enjoyed your sedoka poem! I guess this might have been inspired by Atticus!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much, Helen. I'm happy you like it. Somehow, two sedoka came knocking at my muse's door. LoL 😆
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Comment from dellsworthpoet
A reminder that with gains there are also losses. Reminds me of a song title from Marley's Ghost..."How Can I Ever Be Simple Again?"
The simplicity of the example and the question work well. I like the presentation making the sense of whimsy even deeper.
Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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A reminder that with gains there are also losses. Reminds me of a song title from Marley's Ghost..."How Can I Ever Be Simple Again?"
The simplicity of the example and the question work well. I like the presentation making the sense of whimsy even deeper.
Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review. I am glad it brought happy memories. Have a nice day. :)
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Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a lovely poem and I enjoyed it. It reminds me of the children I used to baby sit for. They are at the age where the world is still all new and it is filled with wonder. Nicely done as always.
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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This is a lovely poem and I enjoyed it. It reminds me of the children I used to baby sit for. They are at the age where the world is still all new and it is filled with wonder. Nicely done as always.
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much, Mary. I appreciate your kind review. I am glad it brought happy memories. Have a nice day. :)
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