Killer Ramble
Just a passing thought or two.5 total reviews
Comment from pookietoo
Way to rhyme this. Good luck in the no rules poetry contest. Enjoy all that life has to offer you. I hope you contine to write poems. I will continue to.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Way to rhyme this. Good luck in the no rules poetry contest. Enjoy all that life has to offer you. I hope you contine to write poems. I will continue to.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to review. I was wondering however what it was about the piece that didn't sit right or that you didn't like that resulted in the four stars. I would love to know so maybe I could make the piece better.
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I don't remember giving you four stars.
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
The way you broke it up it was pretty good I like your flow I thought it was a little misfire but overall it was a good poem and the picture what is that it's great though keep
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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The way you broke it up it was pretty good I like your flow I thought it was a little misfire but overall it was a good poem and the picture what is that it's great though keep
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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I am glad you like it. However, I would love to know what about it didn't work for you resulting in the four stars. I would love the feedback so I could make it better.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This No Rules Poetry Contest contest entry speaks thoughtfully about a killer ramble in thoughts kills his mother, as he knows there is nothing perfect as in lies there is some truth, so he speaks he will kill his mother leaving no proof, to remind us the truth - crime never pays, or crime is never perfect; well said, well done; thank you for this, happy to review this; God Bless U. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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This No Rules Poetry Contest contest entry speaks thoughtfully about a killer ramble in thoughts kills his mother, as he knows there is nothing perfect as in lies there is some truth, so he speaks he will kill his mother leaving no proof, to remind us the truth - crime never pays, or crime is never perfect; well said, well done; thank you for this, happy to review this; God Bless U. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
You are working your magic once again. This is why I like your writing. You bravely express yourself, saying things others hardly even dare to think. You speak for many. Your use of juxtaposition will draw the reader in. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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You are working your magic once again. This is why I like your writing. You bravely express yourself, saying things others hardly even dare to think. You speak for many. Your use of juxtaposition will draw the reader in. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much. I rather enjoy your reviews.
Comment from kahpot
I think you have just left a lot of proof of how clever you are, there are images of deception in your words, in lies there is always truth for the one telling the lies, and yes in this (your poems) read, hello is certainly goodbye, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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I think you have just left a lot of proof of how clever you are, there are images of deception in your words, in lies there is always truth for the one telling the lies, and yes in this (your poems) read, hello is certainly goodbye, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you.
