Swept Away
Short poem, a bit abstract35 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
I love the language as it is truly overwhelming and insightful as well as inspiring dear Victor!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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I love the language as it is truly overwhelming and insightful as well as inspiring dear Victor!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Rebekka, thank you.
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My pleasure entirely dear friend <3
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and
good presentation, Doug.
-Your muse did a good job.
-The beginning is dramatic
with the wind whipping
your paper.
-The next verse follows
that very well, for now
what you had written is gone.
-I like the ending, too.
-Thanks for sharing
your imagination and creativity.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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-Great artwork and
good presentation, Doug.
-Your muse did a good job.
-The beginning is dramatic
with the wind whipping
your paper.
-The next verse follows
that very well, for now
what you had written is gone.
-I like the ending, too.
-Thanks for sharing
your imagination and creativity.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much. Such a nice review. Doug
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You are very welcome, Doug, and I appreciate your reply.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is abstract but poetic. Your muse is very smart. You try to write and interpret this piece of art and it is very hard because it can be interpreted in many different ways.
Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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This is abstract but poetic. Your muse is very smart. You try to write and interpret this piece of art and it is very hard because it can be interpreted in many different ways.
Well done.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you. I like when the reader can go in different directions.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
We live in a world where the word 'ageing' is often paired with 'anti'. Your poem puts a different spin on the completely normal process of getting older. A very unual poem. Out-of-the-box. I like the mood and imagery it sets. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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We live in a world where the word 'ageing' is often paired with 'anti'. Your poem puts a different spin on the completely normal process of getting older. A very unual poem. Out-of-the-box. I like the mood and imagery it sets. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you for reading it.
Comment from estory
I liked how you created this whirlwind rhythm and used it to underscore your theme of the ephemeral nature of man and his creations, his hopes and dreams. Also a great image of those tattered papers scattering in the wind. estory
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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I liked how you created this whirlwind rhythm and used it to underscore your theme of the ephemeral nature of man and his creations, his hopes and dreams. Also a great image of those tattered papers scattering in the wind. estory
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much my friend.
Comment from Possummagic
I enjoyed reading your poem swept away and loved the artwork you incorporated in your presentation. Sometimes the words we write swim before our eyes and take on a life of their own. Lovely. PM
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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I enjoyed reading your poem swept away and loved the artwork you incorporated in your presentation. Sometimes the words we write swim before our eyes and take on a life of their own. Lovely. PM
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you.
Exactly.
Doug
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You are most welcome. PM
Comment from Carlos' girl
I like this. "abstract " poem as you call it. I like the tone, the mood it sets. The illustration is on point. I get alot of imagery from the sparse yet lyrical lines. I like poems that have an element of mystery
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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I like this. "abstract " poem as you call it. I like the tone, the mood it sets. The illustration is on point. I get alot of imagery from the sparse yet lyrical lines. I like poems that have an element of mystery
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much.
Doug
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You're welcome
Comment from Senyai
Hi Victor,
Hmmm, this is about the writing process perhaps and the summits and pitfalls that come with the territory of creating? I gleaned this from your words. Well penned that captures that fleeting feeling of success and then memory and creative thoughts flip away on the wind...
" Fly my pathos,
for I knew thee well.
Now, a kernel,
a seed,
to rot
or take"
...a great editing assist, that pesky wind :))
Always,
Senyai
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Hi Victor,
Hmmm, this is about the writing process perhaps and the summits and pitfalls that come with the territory of creating? I gleaned this from your words. Well penned that captures that fleeting feeling of success and then memory and creative thoughts flip away on the wind...
" Fly my pathos,
for I knew thee well.
Now, a kernel,
a seed,
to rot
or take"
...a great editing assist, that pesky wind :))
Always,
Senyai
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Ha ha. Thank you.
Comment from write hand blue
Hi Victor, poems are not my first interest and I rarely review them, but here goes.
I liked the clear imagery which demonstrated the talent of the poet.
Presented to the reader in a clear thoughtful way.
Great poem.
Thank you for sharing this poem. ~Mel~
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Hi Victor, poems are not my first interest and I rarely review them, but here goes.
I liked the clear imagery which demonstrated the talent of the poet.
Presented to the reader in a clear thoughtful way.
Great poem.
Thank you for sharing this poem. ~Mel~
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Mel.
Comment from kahpot
Age may seem like a downfall, memories will replace vision and it will be enhanced, muses come and muses go that scribble and letter will help them find the way back, an intriguing and excellent read, very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Age may seem like a downfall, memories will replace vision and it will be enhanced, muses come and muses go that scribble and letter will help them find the way back, an intriguing and excellent read, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much. Doug
