Swept Away
Short poem, a bit abstract35 total reviews
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Very nice. A well penned and very lovely piece of poetry. I like how the final lines lead almost to a beginning...and another end, with the rot/take? Anyway well done kindest regards Meia x
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
Very nice. A well penned and very lovely piece of poetry. I like how the final lines lead almost to a beginning...and another end, with the rot/take? Anyway well done kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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Thank you, dear.
Comment from Janet Foor
Short and a bit abstract but I too like it. Sometimes our muse knows us best.
Creative piece with and a thought provoking image in "Swept Away".
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
Short and a bit abstract but I too like it. Sometimes our muse knows us best.
Creative piece with and a thought provoking image in "Swept Away".
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Janet
Comment from Eternal Muse
I am sure - are we talking about a hopelessly failing eyesight? (lol). Your poem is a bit enigmatic and could be interpreted in different ways. I liked your poetic rant with vivid imagery, visuals, great artwork and presentation. Your muse wrote it? It's in a good shape. I'll send my muse to her.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
I am sure - are we talking about a hopelessly failing eyesight? (lol). Your poem is a bit enigmatic and could be interpreted in different ways. I liked your poetic rant with vivid imagery, visuals, great artwork and presentation. Your muse wrote it? It's in a good shape. I'll send my muse to her.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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Ha. Thank you so much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We see our life speeding by at the speed of light and our scribbles become ancient relics as we go, but we strive to stay alive! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
We see our life speeding by at the speed of light and our scribbles become ancient relics as we go, but we strive to stay alive! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you. Good interpretation.
Comment from Janetsue
This is very introspective posting expressed in a creative poetic way. It is like a stream of consciousness writing that I enjoyed reading and arriving at a personal interpretation of the message.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
This is very introspective posting expressed in a creative poetic way. It is like a stream of consciousness writing that I enjoyed reading and arriving at a personal interpretation of the message.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Artasylum
I loved this and those sassy muses think they know everything... however... your muse did a very good job gelling the image to the font to the colors to the words... yours, diana
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
I loved this and those sassy muses think they know everything... however... your muse did a very good job gelling the image to the font to the colors to the words... yours, diana
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Diana
Comment from Wendy G
Your writing and your words may well have been whipped away, but they are then scattered to others to share. All our writing in the end will "fly away" and be no more, but there is still a legacy for others which like a kernel, may grow into something big. Abstract, but thought-provoking. Not sure if I have wel understood your intentions with this one. But I enjoyed the thinking process.
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
Your writing and your words may well have been whipped away, but they are then scattered to others to share. All our writing in the end will "fly away" and be no more, but there is still a legacy for others which like a kernel, may grow into something big. Abstract, but thought-provoking. Not sure if I have wel understood your intentions with this one. But I enjoyed the thinking process.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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And that is what counts. Thank you, dear.
Comment from dragonpoet
Doug,
This is a philosophical free verse on how a part of you is taken away with each poem you write. Each is a kernal you can plant to grow in you or someone else or let rot if not shared.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
Doug,
This is a philosophical free verse on how a part of you is taken away with each poem you write. Each is a kernal you can plant to grow in you or someone else or let rot if not shared.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Joan. I love that take. Doug
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Don't mentionit, Doug.
Joan
Comment from Sally Law
I'm sorry for no six, Doug dear. Please accept a high five. Marvelous muse or you, this is a fantastic favorite. Something simple can morph into something beautiful, as seen here.
Sending you and yours my very best,
Sal :))
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
I'm sorry for no six, Doug dear. Please accept a high five. Marvelous muse or you, this is a fantastic favorite. Something simple can morph into something beautiful, as seen here.
Sending you and yours my very best,
Sal :))
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Awe, thanks Sally. I truly always love to hear from you.
Doug
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You are most welcome!
Sal :))
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Swept Away
by victortouche
Very interesting poem about human life experience, life and death, etc...
Good short poem form. It moves along nicely. Well done, my friend.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
Swept Away
by victortouche
Very interesting poem about human life experience, life and death, etc...
Good short poem form. It moves along nicely. Well done, my friend.
Gypsy
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much.
Doug