Work With
1-9-1 Poem Contest Entry4 total reviews
Comment from writer723
I really enjoyed reading your intriguing poem. It drew me in and held my attention throughout. Your description of this scenario was quite thought-provoking and emotional. Your writing skills are excellent and you have a wonderful gift of expression.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
  |
I really enjoyed reading your intriguing poem. It drew me in and held my attention throughout. Your description of this scenario was quite thought-provoking and emotional. Your writing skills are excellent and you have a wonderful gift of expression.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
-
Thank you for the great review, Writer723. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from samantha0930
I like the joke in your poem about it having to be so short; it's funny and kind of clever. It took me a little bit too to realize that the title is finishing the sentence, and it felt like the title was being cut off too. Usually it feels weird when people use the description line to say that it's a contest entry instead of describing their poem, but for your poem it describes it too since you're making the joke about it. The picture works really well with this too.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
|
I like the joke in your poem about it having to be so short; it's funny and kind of clever. It took me a little bit too to realize that the title is finishing the sentence, and it felt like the title was being cut off too. Usually it feels weird when people use the description line to say that it's a contest entry instead of describing their poem, but for your poem it describes it too since you're making the joke about it. The picture works really well with this too.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
-
Thank you for the great review, Samantha. Yeah, I don't think many people were getting the title being the end of the piece. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from dragonpoet
Well it looked like she needed to plan better. Sometimes we forget computers have limits too.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
|
Well it looked like she needed to plan better. Sometimes we forget computers have limits too.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
-
Thank you for the great review and stars, Joan. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
-
You are most kindly welcome
Joan
Comment from persevere
How I relate to this 1-9-1. In determination I sit down to write a piece and the my muse takes flight. With a fitting illustration you have summed up the situation perfectly. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
|
How I relate to this 1-9-1. In determination I sit down to write a piece and the my muse takes flight. With a fitting illustration you have summed up the situation perfectly. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
-
lol. Thank you for the great review, Perservere. Yeah, our muse does that sometimes. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
