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Undaunted

she is his wonderland

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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This 6 Word Poetry contest entry speaks when search is undaunted and free of restrictions, you can find out what you search for; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Hi Alcreator,

    Thank you for a perceptive review and warm thoughts on my cryptic poem.

    I appreciate your time to read and critique :))

    Always,
    Senyai
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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When it comes to love then the sky is the limit and people will go to great lengths to be together and enjoy each other, you created that connection here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Hi Dolly,

    Wow, spot on with my cryptic 6 line poem! Some did not get it at all :(

    I appreciate your perception and warm and welcoming thoughts. Thank you!

    Always,
    Senyai

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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she was his wonderland
Undaunted
by Senyai


Interesting entry for the 6 Word Poetry contest. I'm not sure what it means. Good word count. The presentation is pretty.

Gypsy

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 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Hi Gypsy,

    My message is a bit cryptic ? the meaning is up to the reader.

    Thanks again Gypsy, for all your help on my haiku :)) I have another one in the oven and will post soon for the Club :))

    Always,
    Senyai
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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Beautiful juxtaposition of images. No holds barred typically means a brawl in which any hold is legal. You contrast that with he "traced" her which is a soft and gentle image. well done with so few words.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Hi Tim,

    Thank you for such a perceptive review! This one is cryptic perhaps, but you found meaning in it ? thanks for that :))

    Also I am so grateful for the gift of six?so nice.

    Always,
    Senyai