Comment from Mary Shifman

Exceptional

This is a terrific and, in my opinion, obviously scary poem. The first thing that came to my mind is that a woman is trying to hide from her abusive husband/lover and he's hunting her down. Well done. I think I'll throw in the towel as far as the contest is concerned because I think this is poem is a shoo-in. Well done!

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hi Mary,

Oh thank you for your keen insight into the cryptic message my poem intended? It is left up to the reader to interpret the meaning?you are spot on, Mary!

Thank you bunches for this gift of six :))

Have a great Tuesday,
Senyai

reply by Mary Shifman on 12-Oct-2021

You are very welcome. It is an extra-ordinary poem.

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Thank you :))

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

A 6-word bomb! There are erotic pathways in this...and a stunning challenge to let your imagination run where it will. Very good entry and I wish you the best of luck!!

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hi Sherry,

Wow! You are a most perceptive one. The cryptic message was intentionally done to let the reader decide the meaning for themselves?

You nailed all aspects that I had while composing. Thanks for that, Sherry :))

Have an outstanding Tuesday,
Senyai

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and
presentation, Senyai.
-Seems you are creating
a mystery with your entry.
-Not easy to do with 6 words,
but you did a good job.
-A lot can be read into
each set of words.
-I can see it as someone painting
a portrait of a woman.
-On the other hand, it could be
something more negative, like
an obsession he has about her.
-It is a very intriguing entry;
hope you do well in the contest.

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hi Pam,

Your perception is showing, lol. Intentionally cryptic, the reader gleans what they will, but you picked up on both my thoughts while I created this?

Thank you for this awesome review:))

Have a lovely Tuesday, Pam
Senyai

reply by Pam (respa) on 12-Oct-2021

You are very welcome, and I love your reply. You made my day telling me I picked up on both of your thoughts! I just thought of another one, which is a combination of the two. She sat for a portrait, and he became obsessed about her. It's amazing what can come through from a few words. You have a great Tuesday, too!

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Wonderful take away from my six words?outstanding!

reply by Pam (respa) on 12-Oct-2021

Thanks, I appreciate it!

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

This intrigues me more than any other poem for this competition. It starts a story. It is left to our imaginations how to finish it. It's very clever. I hope it does well in the competition very well done kindest regards Meia x

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hi Meia,

Wow, your keen perception is appreciated. Intentionally left cryptic, for the reader to glean what they will?

Thanks for this awesome review :))

Senyai

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent

Quite an abstract kind of a very short six-word poem. This leads to many interpretations and leaves much to the imagination of the reader. Very cleverly worded with the accompanying pic adding to the mystery. Good luck in the contest.

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hi Seshadri,

You are very perceptive in your thoughts and keen observation on my cryptic poem. Thank you very much for this outstanding review,

Have a super week :))
Senyai

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

That's a bit creepy, I enjoyed reading it. It leaves a lot to the imagination and I think something unpleasant happened. Well done and thanks for sharing this

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hi Oliver,

The message is cryptic and each reader gleans what they will from the six words.

Thank you for reviewing and for your thoughts in my work.

Have a great week :))
Senyai

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"Undaunted", is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you!

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hi Duchess,

Oh how is the feisty one this morning? I am so glad to hear from you?and thank you for a great review and well wishes! My cryptic six word poem has a meaning up for grabs it seems lol

Have a good week :))
Senyai

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hi Duchess,

Oh how is the feisty one this morning? I am so glad to hear from you?and thank you for a great review and well wishes! My cryptic six word poem has a meaning up for grabs it seems lol

Have a good week :))
Senyai

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 12-Oct-2021

Hi Senyai,
The feisty one is fine. Hopefully you're the same :)))

You have a great week too,
the Duchess

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Thank you :))

Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .

Excellent

I enjoyed this six word poem it was great thank you for sharing keep up the good work your Force to be reckoned with once again thank you for sharing this unique six word treat

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hello Giftedone,

Oh thank you for such a unique review. I am appreciative of your time to assess my work and comment. I thank you :))

Have a wonderful week,
Senyai

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

I like the pictures. It does show "undaunted.

"He traces her..." are three strong words. It could mean one lost one's love and was in pursuit to look for the lost one.

Thanks for explaining what "No hols barred" means. In this assumption, it might mean: He traces her with all might.

Thank you for sharing.

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hi GoodAdvice,

I appreciate your time to review and cherish your thoughts. My poem is cryptic and what you glean from it is yours :))

Have a great week,
Senyai

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This poem is not complete. Deliberately so it seems. So it leaves us searching. Searching to trace her with him, searching for rhyme and reason, searching for the end and closure. It is a very stimulating exercise.

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hi Katherine,

Yes, deliberately left incomplete for the reader to glean meaning, although I had creative meaning when I wrote it, but now I gave it away so it is there to take what one will from it.

Thanks for an amazingly perceptive review! Your review is 10x better than my cryptic 6 word poem lol!

Have a great week, Katherine
Senyai