Comment from victor 66

Excellent

If you were talking about love, more power to you. If you're talking about stalking a lady, I can't help you. This is very interesting six word poem. I wish you luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hi Victor,

I was definitely talking about love. Because my 6 words were cryptic with two juxtapositional ideas, it is whatever the reader gleans from them?it has been an eye opening experience for me as my intention was far from creepy? but something sensual. Many took it to tracing her either as in an artwork sense as in painting a portrait or on the other spectrum of stalking someone?. Rarely did the sensual lovemaking sense come to light?which was my intention.

Thank you for your keen perception here.

Have a great week,
Senyai

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hi Victor,

I was definitely talking about love. Because my 6 words were cryptic with two juxtapositional ideas, it is whatever the reader gleans from them?it has been an eye opening experience for me as my intention was far from creepy? but something sensual. Many took it to tracing her either as in an artwork sense as in painting a portrait or on the other spectrum of stalking someone?. Rarely did the sensual lovemaking sense come to light?which was my intention.

Thank you for your keen perception here.

Have a great week,
Senyai

reply by victor 66 on 19-Oct-2021

You are most welcome,senyai. I especially appreciate your in-depth reply.

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Nature speaks for herself. You say it will, and so true. She never apologizes for her actions but makes things right in the end. Best to you with this fine short poem.

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hi Ben,

Love this review! Your keen perception is appreciated! Thank you for getting my intended message. I am amazed by all the interpretations of my cryptic 6 lines?. really eye opening for sure lol

Have a great week :))
Senyai

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hi Ben,

Love this review! Your keen perception is appreciated! Thank you for getting my intended message. I am amazed by all the interpretations of my cryptic 6 lines?. really eye opening for sure lol

Have a great week :))
Senyai

Comment from amahra

Excellent

This is my 6th or 7th six-word poem and I'm not tired of them yet. Poets seem to pack so much into these few words that it's astounding. The artwork also is fascinating. Great job!

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hi Amahra,

Wow, you hit the nail on the head with this great statement and review! Your keen sense of perception lets your mind create the story. That?s what 6 words are supposed to do, I feel. My lines are cryptic and I am amazed by the myriad interpretations I have gotten. Been eye opening for sure ?from downright creepy to extremely sensual to simply an artist sketching this woman?

Great review! Thanks, Amahra.

Have a great week,
Senyai

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hi Amahra,

Wow, you hit the nail on the head with this great statement and review! Your keen sense of perception lets your mind create the story. That?s what 6 words are supposed to do, I feel. My lines are cryptic and I am amazed by the myriad interpretations I have gotten. Been eye opening for sure ?from downright creepy to extremely sensual to simply an artist sketching this woman?

Great review! Thanks, Amahra.

Have a great week,
Senyai

reply by amahra on 13-Oct-2021

Comment from royowen

Excellent

The wonderful thing about a man treating his woman well, is the connection becomes part of how a man an a woman should love one another, beautifully written my friend. Blessings Roy

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021

Hi Roy,

I thank you for such a wonderful review and thoughts on my six word poem (if you can call it a poem). You are a wise man, Mr. Owen :)).

Yes, I see how a man sets the stage for the marriage or relationship ?

Thanks again for your wise words, Roy

Always,
Senyai

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021

Hi Roy,

I thank you for such a wonderful review and thoughts on my six word poem (if you can call it a poem). You are a wise man, Mr. Owen :)).

Yes, I see how a man sets the stage for the marriage or relationship ?

Thanks again for your wise words, Roy

Always,
Senyai

reply by royowen on 13-Oct-2021

Well done

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Every time I read one of these six word poems that say so much, I'm taken back to the six word story written my Hemingway, which read: For sale: baby shoes, never worn. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021

Hi Ric,

Ahh, Hemingway was such a good writer. That short line story breaks my heart?. Thanks for your thoughts on my work, its always a treat hearing from you :))

Have a wonderful Wednesday,
Senyai

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021

Hi Ric,

Ahh, Hemingway was such a good writer. That short line story breaks my heart?. Thanks for your thoughts on my work, its always a treat hearing from you :))

Have a wonderful Wednesday,
Senyai

Comment from Cristine22

Excellent

Lovely. You've managed to give me such a vivid picture with so few words. There are so many places this could go, and I love how you've given us a sense of wonder and curiosity of everything surrounding this moment/scene. Well done!

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021

Hi Cristine,

You are spot on with your perception of my cryptic poem? there can be many interpretations with this one. Thanks for your great review and interesting thoughts on this six word offering.

Have a wonderful Wednesday :))

Senyai

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021

Hi Cristine,

You are spot on with your perception of my cryptic poem? there can be many interpretations with this one. Thanks for your great review and interesting thoughts on this six word offering.

Have a wonderful Wednesday :))

Senyai

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. You said it all in only six words. You even left us with a mystery to solve. Who is he? Why is he stalking her? Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hi Barbara,

Your perception is spot on? thank you for a stellar review and thoughts!

Have a wonderful Tuesday, Barbara,
Senyai

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

The man whos ardor is not restrained, towards the goal of securing the attention of a desired mate will not be easily discouraged in his pursuit of love. He may not succeed, but he will not be soon forgotten. Many times it is the one who is not afraid to ask, who gets the prize, to the dismay and surprise of all the others.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hi Nomi,

Wow, this review is awesome. Thanks for your perception on my six words. Intentionally cryptic, my message was left up to the reader.

Have a great Tuesday :))
Senyai

reply by nomi338 on 12-Oct-2021

I have so often been the one who lost out due to timidity. So, I recognized the message right away.

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

:))

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Excellent 6 word poem Senyai. So few words to create an intriguing message.
This is Exceptional.
Artworks is perfect.

Loved it

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hi Janet,

Thank you for an amazing review and thoughts! I appreciate your perspective thoughts.

Have a lovely Tuesday :))
Senyai

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Exceptional! So few words to leave the reader exploring their own mind as where this poem will lead them. I see the unclear ripples in the reflection on the water and think sadness and longing... but it could be danger and terror as well. A wonderful addition to the contest!

Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Hi Carol,

Once again your keen perception is noted? thank you for your complimentary thoughts and encouragement. I appreciate them both :))

Have an outstanding day, Carol
Senyai