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Walking On The Dark Side

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Struggling to hold my family together-

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Comment from Carol Clark2
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Such a moving prayer and an emotional writing. I know you're wrestling with difficult circumstances, and I'm praying for your peace and safety, and for your family. Thanks for sharing. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.

    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sally Law
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It takes great humility to ask for prayer and God hears the humble prayers. I'm still praying for your situation, and hope things are improving. Sending you my best today as always and blessings abundant,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.

    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
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Carol, I'm so sorry you are going this dark valley. I wish there was something I could say or do to make it better, but I can only keep you in my prayers. Some day, past this crisis you'll look back nad see it was God who carried you though it with his strenth, and I believe somewhere there is a light at the end of this tunnel.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.

    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
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One of those who is seldom at a loss for words, this is a time when I truly am afraid to say anything, careful not to say the wrong thing. But please know you are in my prayers and I hope the burdens will be lifted soon!

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.

    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from robyn corum
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Carol,

This is wonderful. It's a great way of reaching out to friends to let them know that something is hurting you. Even though we may not know what it is, this community always comes together to inspire, uplift, and care for one another. You and your family are certainly in my prayers.

PS - remove the quote marks from the ends of the paragraphs.

Love you.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.

    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sherry Asbury
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Whatever evil challenge has come to you - you are not alone. Here at FS is a forest of candles, lit so you may stay in the light. My prayers go up to God for you and your family. Do not think you are alone. I had jail doors close me in for something I did not do. Many of us have faced horrendous injustices. Just keep praying, my lovely lady!! I will.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
    Thank you from the bottom of my heart, Sherry. I truly appreciate your thoughts, prayers, and kindness.

    Hugs, Carol
reply by Sherry Asbury on 11-Oct-2021
    I am by your side, always.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
    Thank you. That means a lot!
Comment from Judy Lawless
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Whatever it is that you are going though sounds ominous, Carol. I'm glad you can find some community among fellow writers, and distraction through your own writing. You've done a great job of expressing all of this in this story. Good luck in the contest. Always in my thoughts and prayers. Hugs

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
    thank you, Judy. It's the worse thing I have ever been through... it's destroying my family. Hopefully, when it is all over, I can write about it, but for now, it's not possible.

    Hugs, Carol
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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You and your family have encountered hardship so you need help to sail through it. Then the best way to ask for help is to pray to God. This is a well written prayer but I really want to know your story if it is Okay to share.

Well done and good luck.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
    Thank you so much for your kindness and for taking the time to read my story. I was sitting at my computer this morning and it just kind of flowed out of me.

    Hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I hope you know I am a prayer warrior and you and your family remain at the top of my list. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. The reading was easy, although the subject matter stung. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
    Thanks, Barbara I know you are always there for me in so many ways. This morning has been a rough one and I was sitting at the computer and just started to write. It was in third person until I reread what I had written and realized it was me...right then, right now. Always, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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You've had a lot to contend with, Carol, and you are doing great, you might not think it now, but you are. God will carry you through this, just continue to lean on Him, He won't mind at all. This is a lovely prayer, dear Carol, and has been heard, of that I'm sure. Good luck in the contest, you couldn't get a more heartfelt true story than this one. Love and hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
    Thank you, Sandra

    It's not been a good morning and I was sitting here at the computer and the story just started to unfold. At first, it was in third person and then I realized I was writing about me. Crazy, huh? As I finished, I saw the contest - because I almost didn't post it - guess it was meant to be.

    Love you my dear friend, Hugs, Carol