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Walking On The Dark Side

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Struggling to hold my family together-

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Comment from pookietoo
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A wonderful story. I hope it does well in the contest you wrote it for. Keep up the great work. Take care, and enjoy the little things of life. Smile, others will too.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.

    Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by pookietoo on 20-Oct-2021
    Welcome.
Comment from dmt1967
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This is a compelling story and my heart goes out to you. I felt the emotion and despair of this piece and wish I could be on here more to give you am outlet. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    I thank you so much for caring and for understanding. It's a difficult time and my only survival mode is trying to write and lose myself within my characters.

    Smiles, Carol
Comment from Patty Palmer
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Although we don't know what it is that is weighing your heart down with worry and possibly pain, know that your friends here in FS are here for you always. I keep you in my prayers and in my heart even when I've been away. It may sound cheesy, but I truly believe that if the Lord brought you to it, He'll see you through it. Know He is always there for you and your family. I'm here if there is ever anything I can do to help. I'm keeping a candle burning for you.
XXOO
Patty

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.

    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from karenina
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Bless you in this time of need. God will see you through...and one way is inspiring you to write this....

You have a family of supporters here who are praying with you and for you.

We need not know the whole story. Your family is in crisis and it doesn't appear it will resolve quickly.

We love you Carol.

Anything at all we can do, message!

Until then, doing to your faith...

It will see you through!

Karenina

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
    Forgive me please for my poor display of gratitude and appreciation. I truly am grateful for all your time, your review and your thoughtfulness. I'm struggling with life and I apologize for neglecting your efforts. I am weeks behind in responding so I must at least cut and paste a thank you and hope you understand. I am thrilled that you have taken the time to read my story and to enjoy it.

    Smiles, hugs and much love for all the support.
    Carol
reply by karenina on 28-Oct-2021
    Oh my. Do not give it a thought! We know you are quite besieged, and are praying for you!

    Karenina
Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for sharing your journey through your prayers to the Lord. I know you can't share specifics but I know it must be something very serious. Continued prayers for you and yours, Carol!

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.

    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Barlow
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Wow! This is listed under Spiritual non-fiction. You have been elusive regarding what has happened in the past or something that you have done that has affected your family. Presumably, the entity you are praying to will know. It is a powerful piece, if not a bit chilling to read. So much has been left out. It almost read like a poem. It had a wonderful lilt to it. very well done.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.

    Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by Sandra Barlow on 21-Oct-2021
    You're welcome.
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
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Oh, dear Carol, you are still very much in my prayers. I know from my own experience that sometimes we can't reveal all that's taking place in our own world, the world of our families, our homes, our lives, our hearts. I don't know what you're going through, but we share a common humanity, and nothing happens that surprises God. He's got this.
Thank you for reaching out. I send you a big hug, wrapping my arms around you.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.

    Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 20-Oct-2021
    Dear Carol, you and your family are still very much on my heart and mind. I hope and pray that things are improving. I can't talk about all of my own difficulties and trials either, but we must remember Romans 8:28, that "God works all things together for good for those that love him, who are called according to his purpose." (That might not be exact, as I'm quoting from memory.) Sometimes it's very hard to accept the things that come our way, but we keep believing ...
    I will keep praying for you.
    Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from LJbutterfly
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Your prayer reads like beautifully written poetry, filled with courage, faith, hope and pain. Sharing your vulnerability and strength casts an encouraging light on your FanStory friends and supporters. We see your faith in God and will see God work wonders in your life. You are blessed and you are a blessing. My prayers are with you and your family.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.

    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
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A beautiful but sad and honest prayer. He hears every word, knows every thought, sees every tear. Understands everything. I have been praying and will continue to do so. May He bless you with glimpses of His light.
Love and hugs.
Wendy

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.

    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
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Yes, when all hope seems to have dissolved in a morass of confusion, and reality has escaped this world, there is only one place to go, that beckoning light that calls our name, and waits to cover us in its brightness. Hope is omnipresent, it does not desert us, although it seems to sometimes, darkness will vanish under its radiant power. Beautifully written my friend, an excellent post, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.

    Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by royowen on 20-Oct-2021
    Welcome Carol