Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Aiona,
This cinquain is formed well and its speaker asks for love to be in the actions as well as the words. This is the kind of love we all want.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021

Thanks for the review, Joan.

Comment from Halfree

Excellent

Thought this said a lot in a few chosen word. Read this and it was OK and went on my merry way. Then, for some reason, I flipped back and read again... This second read ...something clicked. Line 3... said a lot. This is a very good poem ... you did good,

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021

Thanks, Halfree. Line 3? Heh! I had to go back and read it. I'm glad you liked it.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Excellent way to express the need to show love by deeds that back up the words. It's easy to say words of love but if love is not showed in action, it's not really love. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021

Thanks, lyenochka.

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This is an extremely appealing poem, which you have chosen to put in as a cinquain. It would of course equally have made a compelling love poem. Good luck anyway in the contest you have chosen.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021

Thanks, Katherine.

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent

I like this short but very impressive poem on love. Love is a many-splendoured thing or it's all you need. But regardless of how you define it, love can often be hard to express or put into words, Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021

Thanks, Seshadri.