THE CURSE
Viewing comments for Chapter 85 "The Biters/Part Three"The six book of the Novels of the Breedline
5 total reviews
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is another great episode. Kind of creepy with all those nasty biters in the room. I don't think I'd make it as a monster slayer. I really am going to need to start reading the series from the beginning. At the moment, I've got so many projects going, I don't have much time for reading. Well done, and I'm ready for the next chapter.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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This is another great episode. Kind of creepy with all those nasty biters in the room. I don't think I'd make it as a monster slayer. I really am going to need to start reading the series from the beginning. At the moment, I've got so many projects going, I don't have much time for reading. Well done, and I'm ready for the next chapter.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Mary :)
I appreciate you taking the time to read my chapter. Glad it was entertaining. Those little Biters are sure giving the Breedline a hard time. LOL! I did have fun creating it. Next Monday, I'll have more on this nasty creatures.
Thanks again for the kind words and fabulous review!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment from royowen
I don't know how you do it dear Shana, you have an incredibly active imagination and the ability to create ad finitum new and incredibly marvellous new plots to delight the reader. Your descriptive imagery is second to none, and to add to that you recreate the best fight scenes around. The "gang" have come across a scene that would have confronted the liberating liberating the death camps in Germany at the end of WW2. Beautifully written dear girl, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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I don't know how you do it dear Shana, you have an incredibly active imagination and the ability to create ad finitum new and incredibly marvellous new plots to delight the reader. Your descriptive imagery is second to none, and to add to that you recreate the best fight scenes around. The "gang" have come across a scene that would have confronted the liberating liberating the death camps in Germany at the end of WW2. Beautifully written dear girl, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Awww... thanks Roy :)
I had a lot of fun creating this one, especially Jace's scenes. He reminds me of my son. LOL!
I always look forward to your opinion. You're always so positive and encouraging. I appreciate YOU!
Always your fan,
Shana :)
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Well done
Comment from Hitcher
Well you can definitely hold a captive audience. I thoroughly enjoyed your chapter. The tension was palpable and the visuals were excellent ; )) I do have a soft spot for the vampire, wolf genres.
How many chapters in this thus far friend, I am tempted to go back and catch up, that is how much you pulled me in : ))
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Well you can definitely hold a captive audience. I thoroughly enjoyed your chapter. The tension was palpable and the visuals were excellent ; )) I do have a soft spot for the vampire, wolf genres.
How many chapters in this thus far friend, I am tempted to go back and catch up, that is how much you pulled me in : ))
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much, Hitcher :)
So thrilled you enjoyed this chapter. I had a fun time creating it, especially Jace's scenes. He reminds me of my son. LOL!
I have a lot of characters built up since this is my sixth novel in the Breedline series. They are edited a lot better on Amazon. The chapters I post here are fun to share and get feedback and helpful advice before it goes to my editor. Everyone here has pretty much been encouraging to me. I'm hoping to wrap this book up before the end of the new year and get it out on Amazon.
Thanks for the kind words and awesome review! I appreciate it!
Sincerely,
Shana Congrove
Comment from AJ McCall
STOP LEAVING ME A CLIFF HANGER SHANAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
I don't why I thought you'd actually put the entire scene of them fighting the Biters in the post. (Silly me.) Jace is just way too much at the moment, Going to pee in a place where there are vampires?! This guy is just too funny. And Maximum Pierce... yes, I remember him very well. I would say just let him die, but I still think he should face charges for what he's done. I'm sure the next chapter's going to be hectic!
I did notice some typos:
He immediately (through) his hands out.
The second typo is the first paragraph at the top of the page; the words are really spaced out from each other. I think it might be a format error.
Anyway, I guess I'll be here stalking the page until you post again, lol. Next Monday feels like an eternity! LOL. SIX STARS!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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STOP LEAVING ME A CLIFF HANGER SHANAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
I don't why I thought you'd actually put the entire scene of them fighting the Biters in the post. (Silly me.) Jace is just way too much at the moment, Going to pee in a place where there are vampires?! This guy is just too funny. And Maximum Pierce... yes, I remember him very well. I would say just let him die, but I still think he should face charges for what he's done. I'm sure the next chapter's going to be hectic!
I did notice some typos:
He immediately (through) his hands out.
The second typo is the first paragraph at the top of the page; the words are really spaced out from each other. I think it might be a format error.
Anyway, I guess I'll be here stalking the page until you post again, lol. Next Monday feels like an eternity! LOL. SIX STARS!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Awww... thanks so much, AJ :)
I know how much you love cliff hangers. This one was for especially you. Haha! I'm glad I continue to entertain you. It means the world to me that you still enjoy the plot and Jace's silly personality. He reminds me of my son. LOL!
Oh, thanks for mentioning the typos. You are so good! I will have more excitement next week.
I appreciate you, girl! :)
Hugs,
Shana :)
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You are just too funny, Shana! You're welcome as always. And like your son? That explains a lot about Jace LOL. I'll be waiting for that action!!!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Chapter, Part Three of Supernatural Science Fiction speaks amply about the biters (Biters), Tim and the others turned in horror to find the Biters, even rising from their slumber like animated corpses, well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR SOSTHEE DAY
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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This Chapter, Part Three of Supernatural Science Fiction speaks amply about the biters (Biters), Tim and the others turned in horror to find the Biters, even rising from their slumber like animated corpses, well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR SOSTHEE DAY
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Alcreator :)
So happy to hear you enjoyed this one. I had fun creating it, especially Jace's scenes. He reminds me of my son. LOL!
I hope to hear from you again my friend.
SIncerely,
Shana :)
