Shape Shifter
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Shape Shifter Part Sixteen"A Detective John Dutton Novellette
7 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Your use of personification causes the reader to invest more interest in the scene.
In case the reader has not assessed the situation, Dutton lets the reader in on the god-like perception he has of Adler. There a cautionary tale being written here with a clear sense of powerlessness on Dutton's part. There is the one liner referring to the title. It's like Catcher in the Rye. Somewhere in the middle is is mentioned that someone is a catcher in the rye, only that once. You're in good company
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Your use of personification causes the reader to invest more interest in the scene.
In case the reader has not assessed the situation, Dutton lets the reader in on the god-like perception he has of Adler. There a cautionary tale being written here with a clear sense of powerlessness on Dutton's part. There is the one liner referring to the title. It's like Catcher in the Rye. Somewhere in the middle is is mentioned that someone is a catcher in the rye, only that once. You're in good company
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Much appreciated review.
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Great work
Comment from Ulla
Hi Brett, that Adler character doesn't stop at anything, does he? You are describing this so very well. Macabre as it, I so enjoy reading in. You're really doing a very good job. So now you've left us with half a head. Ouch! And now what? Until the next part. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Hi Brett, that Adler character doesn't stop at anything, does he? You are describing this so very well. Macabre as it, I so enjoy reading in. You're really doing a very good job. So now you've left us with half a head. Ouch! And now what? Until the next part. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from BethShelby
If Dutton is always so correct why is it he hasn;'t stopped the sickko from killing so many people. It seems to me that sawing a head in half would be a lot of work and require some tools most people don't possess. I'll be relieved when Dutton ends this crime spree.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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If Dutton is always so correct why is it he hasn;'t stopped the sickko from killing so many people. It seems to me that sawing a head in half would be a lot of work and require some tools most people don't possess. I'll be relieved when Dutton ends this crime spree.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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So much appreciate your insightful reviews.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Chapter Sixteen of the Mystery and Crime Fiction speaks an interesting, innovative and adventurous work about shape shifter thru a solid scientific taletelling, fostered by dialogues so practicably realistic; well said, well done; thank you for this, happy to review this; God Bless you, my dear good writer, wish read more. ALCREATOR, October, Festive Month...
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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This Chapter Sixteen of the Mystery and Crime Fiction speaks an interesting, innovative and adventurous work about shape shifter thru a solid scientific taletelling, fostered by dialogues so practicably realistic; well said, well done; thank you for this, happy to review this; God Bless you, my dear good writer, wish read more. ALCREATOR, October, Festive Month...
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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Whatever.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Human Design does fit into this story nicely. I'm concerned about Ballister's comment '"How can you stand always being correctamundo about Adler? All the frigging time!" & It's like the two of you are one?" It's sort of scary Dutton understands him that well. This is another good job.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Human Design does fit into this story nicely. I'm concerned about Ballister's comment '"How can you stand always being correctamundo about Adler? All the frigging time!" & It's like the two of you are one?" It's sort of scary Dutton understands him that well. This is another good job.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate your review.
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is interesting...and disturbing, Brett. But still I continue to read because I'm hooked on the story, hoping for a better outcome. :) Thanks for explaining the difference between Manifestors and Generators in your notes. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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This is interesting...and disturbing, Brett. But still I continue to read because I'm hooked on the story, hoping for a better outcome. :) Thanks for explaining the difference between Manifestors and Generators in your notes. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate your review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm thinking that you just threw us a big clue that most of us will read right through. But, since I can't be sure, I'll keep reading patiently for what comes next. I'm sure you get tired of me saying everything you write deserves a six, and then, me giving you a five. But I never have any sixes so late in the week. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
They laid (lay) there in a variety of sizes.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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I'm thinking that you just threw us a big clue that most of us will read right through. But, since I can't be sure, I'll keep reading patiently for what comes next. I'm sure you get tired of me saying everything you write deserves a six, and then, me giving you a five. But I never have any sixes so late in the week. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
They laid (lay) there in a variety of sizes.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Always insightful, much appreciated reviews.
