Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

This is precious. It makes me thing of a couple of pets I've had. One cat presently walks up my dirt road with me. I think he sits outside waiting for me to come out. I am voting for this one.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021

Thank you for your kind comments. Animals are wonderful, cheers

reply by Liz O'Neill on 12-Oct-2021

***big smile***

Comment from Susan Newell

Excellent

This was a fun read . . . Or should I say sing? I loved the characters and how the fun was described. I also liked the part about getting tired and going home for refueling. Good luck.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021

Thanks Susan for your lovely comments. Much appreciated.

reply by Susan Newell on 11-Oct-2021

Welcome.

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

Really good. I take it that this was written by the wife of a football fan. The meter fits perfectly with the song. It should do very well in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021

Thank you Paul for your positive comments.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Yes you have written a fun piece and I can just see that happening. Like my dog! It goes well with the tune and your rhyme is good too. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021

Thank you for your positive feedback. It was fun to write and sing!