The Dramatic society
An interesting rehearsal2 total reviews
Comment from Hitcher
Ha ha, I'm thinking with pick up lines like that... Jane is going to be getting a lot of... Action!
Your 50 word flash definitely made me smile so for that fact alone I wish you all the best in the booth : ))
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
  |
Ha ha, I'm thinking with pick up lines like that... Jane is going to be getting a lot of... Action!
Your 50 word flash definitely made me smile so for that fact alone I wish you all the best in the booth : ))
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
-
Thanks a lot Hitcher
Comment from Wendy G
Not much left to the imagination in her role as seductress! It is well thought through, but quotation marks would improve it for the direct speech, in my view, but it is just a suggestion.... I wish you well for the Flash Fiction contest.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
|
Not much left to the imagination in her role as seductress! It is well thought through, but quotation marks would improve it for the direct speech, in my view, but it is just a suggestion.... I wish you well for the Flash Fiction contest.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
-
Thanks Wendy. I didn't think exclamation marks were needed when it's all dialogue.
