Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

A nice scene of a lovely couple. Love should be like this. A little romance, a glass of wine, better still a kiss and ... wish all lovers in the world can live a life like this .

Thanks for sharing the story

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021

Thanks for the feedback and I like your internal rhyme.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

And the rest of the story is left to our imagination! Well written with exactly the right choice of photo to accompany your flash fiction. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021

Thank you, Wendy, for your read and feedback.

Comment from Hitcher

Excellent

Yep, that one works every time in our home... like a moth to a flame who is hoping to get his wings burned from the intense heat, i follow, ha ha. This is a great little dribble which I HOPE many will be able to relate to : ))

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021

Thanks for the read and the feedback. Wishing you a perfect night.