Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "Football Chapter 30 part 1"A mother faces life's struggles.
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Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Oh, barbara:
I am so very sorry you broke your wrist. I have been missing for a good while due to some life issues that just happened and took priority. Teaching, while still the best job I've ever had, seems to exhaust me these days. I believe having to wear a mask almost non-stop for 6-8 hours a day is part of the problem.
I love this new information about Katherine. Adds depth to her being!
Take care and be safe. jan
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Oh, barbara:
I am so very sorry you broke your wrist. I have been missing for a good while due to some life issues that just happened and took priority. Teaching, while still the best job I've ever had, seems to exhaust me these days. I believe having to wear a mask almost non-stop for 6-8 hours a day is part of the problem.
I love this new information about Katherine. Adds depth to her being!
Take care and be safe. jan
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the kind review. I will pray for your situation.
Comment from tfawcus
Another great chapter, Barbara. Gabriel is sure scoring a few Brownie points with his concern and generous actions. As always, I find the repartee most engaging.
Glad to hear the op was successful and the wrist is getting better.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Another great chapter, Barbara. Gabriel is sure scoring a few Brownie points with his concern and generous actions. As always, I find the repartee most engaging.
Glad to hear the op was successful and the wrist is getting better.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I don't think that other coach will give up just yet. He's going to complain, I just know it! Lol. Some people are bad losers. Another great chapter, Barbara, I'm enjoying your novel. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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I don't think that other coach will give up just yet. He's going to complain, I just know it! Lol. Some people are bad losers. Another great chapter, Barbara, I'm enjoying your novel. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for sharing your
granddaughter's photo and
the update on your wrist, barbara.
-Hope things continue to go well.
-A very good chapter that follows
well from the previous one; it
certainly made things hectic.
-I was wondering about Katherine's
running by her team and playing the music.
-I didn't know things like that were allowed.
-Obviously, the other coach didn't think so either.
-The coach gives a good overview of
Katherine's scholastic background, and
I like how she mentions what Katherine
probably taught! Little did she know.
-One very small thing:
The coach returned to where Mr. Edward
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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-Thanks for sharing your
granddaughter's photo and
the update on your wrist, barbara.
-Hope things continue to go well.
-A very good chapter that follows
well from the previous one; it
certainly made things hectic.
-I was wondering about Katherine's
running by her team and playing the music.
-I didn't know things like that were allowed.
-Obviously, the other coach didn't think so either.
-The coach gives a good overview of
Katherine's scholastic background, and
I like how she mentions what Katherine
probably taught! Little did she know.
-One very small thing:
The coach returned to where Mr. Edward
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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I will look at that section. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are very welcome. You left the 's' off of Edwards.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Babara.Wilkey,
Nice piece of Romance Fiction in continuation having captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and highlighting Gabriel's extraordinary smartness while handling the situation regarding games' Rules/Regulations side by side remarkable plus points of Katherine's personality.
The story is moving ahead in an interesting way.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Hello Babara.Wilkey,
Nice piece of Romance Fiction in continuation having captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and highlighting Gabriel's extraordinary smartness while handling the situation regarding games' Rules/Regulations side by side remarkable plus points of Katherine's personality.
The story is moving ahead in an interesting way.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Barbara.Wilkey, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Okay it was good it was fair thank you for your share kind of long for me but it made its point and that's all that counts thank you for sharing and doing you great job
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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Okay it was good it was fair thank you for your share kind of long for me but it made its point and that's all that counts thank you for sharing and doing you great job
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lancellot
Another well written chapter. you do a great job going over your chapters before presenting them.
She's captured my heart. How'd she do it so fast? - This is a good question and I'm glad to see Coach asking himself this, because I'm sure many readers will to.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Another well written chapter. you do a great job going over your chapters before presenting them.
She's captured my heart. How'd she do it so fast? - This is a good question and I'm glad to see Coach asking himself this, because I'm sure many readers will to.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Alaskastory
"Football Chapter 30 part 1" is a really fun read. The characters seem to come out really well. My only suggestion is to one spot where I think the words she says should come before she runs off in .......Katherine ran off to join her girls. "Got to go."
Enjoyable story!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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"Football Chapter 30 part 1" is a really fun read. The characters seem to come out really well. My only suggestion is to one spot where I think the words she says should come before she runs off in .......Katherine ran off to join her girls. "Got to go."
Enjoyable story!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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I have always been taught action comes before words, but I agree with you. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from pookietoo
A great story. How long did it take you to write? Some stories are fun to write. It depends on the topic. How many chapters are in your book? Happy Columbus Day.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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A great story. How long did it take you to write? Some stories are fun to write. It depends on the topic. How many chapters are in your book? Happy Columbus Day.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the kind review. Good question. I don't know off the top of my head. It has over 103,000 words. I'm trying to cut it diwn.
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Welcome.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I was surprised to see your post this week, figuring typing might be difficult to impossible. But it's hard to keep the tough girls down. I hope the wrist is good as new soon. Well, close as it can be. And if I haven't mentioned it, the pretty new picture at to the reading experience. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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I was surprised to see your post this week, figuring typing might be difficult to impossible. But it's hard to keep the tough girls down. I hope the wrist is good as new soon. Well, close as it can be. And if I haven't mentioned it, the pretty new picture at to the reading experience. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Thank you. I sit here with my left arm on a pillow and an ice pack on it and peck away with my right. Capital letters are the worst.
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I'm sure it's a struggle that most wouldn't even attempt. I hope you feel better soon!
