Such is Life
The beginning, the end and what comes between...5 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
These three lines tell the circle for life, from birth to death. Hopefully we have our heads high above water with no waves for most of our lives.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2021
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These three lines tell the circle for life, from birth to death. Hopefully we have our heads high above water with no waves for most of our lives.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 18-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for your rating and review. I thought of going with something more positive for the second line but this is real life. Not that it's all tough but I wanted to be real. I am so excited to have placed, it is my first time!
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You are most kindly welcome, Bella.
Joan
Comment from Daylok
Excellent poem! I picture is perfect and the words bring clear meaning. Makes the reader think of deep meaning. Congrats on placing in the contest.
Nicely written.
~Daylok
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2021
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Excellent poem! I picture is perfect and the words bring clear meaning. Makes the reader think of deep meaning. Congrats on placing in the contest.
Nicely written.
~Daylok
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2021
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Thank so much for your rating and review. The picture comes from a civil war cemetery near my house. I took the picture some time ago. I think it is fitting..I am so excited to have placed, it is my first time.
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Wow, that?s cool!!
Congrats again. Well deserved!
~Daylok
Comment from James Scott
The picture is spot on. The words have a depth that speaks, it drew something familiar from inside me. Its amazing how only six words can say so much, life in a summary. Well written.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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The picture is spot on. The words have a depth that speaks, it drew something familiar from inside me. Its amazing how only six words can say so much, life in a summary. Well written.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for your rating and review. I did reply a few days ago but it is not showing up that it was sent. So just in case, you didn't get it I didn't want to miss the opportunity to thank you!
Comment from Eunice Amero
Head first. Each time my oldest son fell he went head first. The saying lve heard people say keep your head above water to encourage them. The one l dont like is head stone. Then there is headache. But its not a phase. Youdid a good job. Thank you fir sharing
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
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Head first. Each time my oldest son fell he went head first. The saying lve heard people say keep your head above water to encourage them. The one l dont like is head stone. Then there is headache. But its not a phase. Youdid a good job. Thank you fir sharing
Comment Written 09-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for your rating and review!
Comment from Paul McFarland
I didn't really appreciate this short poem until I read your notes. This expresses what life is in a very abbreviated fashion. Probably somewhere in the middle we will have headlines.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
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I didn't really appreciate this short poem until I read your notes. This expresses what life is in a very abbreviated fashion. Probably somewhere in the middle we will have headlines.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for your rating and review!
