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Poem 5/7/53 total reviews
Comment from James Scott
Spot on. Your words expressed my feelings about the volcanic eruption in La palma. Fear and Awe. Not many things draw opposite emotions, You captured it well.
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Spot on. Your words expressed my feelings about the volcanic eruption in La palma. Fear and Awe. Not many things draw opposite emotions, You captured it well.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a poignant write that I can identify with as the volcano on La Palma erupts and people have flocked to the island to watch, yet the destruction has destroyed many homes and the insurance will not cover the loss, very scary, love Dolly x
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This is a poignant write that I can identify with as the volcano on La Palma erupts and people have flocked to the island to watch, yet the destruction has destroyed many homes and the insurance will not cover the loss, very scary, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Oct-2021
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Yes thanks for sharing -strange times !zanya
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A strong image. The words are well chosen. The poem flows well. The message is conveyed well.
Suggestions:
The first line has six syllables. Lava is two syllables. This could be easily corrected by removing the word
as. That word adds little to the message in my mind.
A good read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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A strong image. The words are well chosen. The poem flows well. The message is conveyed well.
Suggestions:
The first line has six syllables. Lava is two syllables. This could be easily corrected by removing the word
as. That word adds little to the message in my mind.
A good read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thanks for reviewing and those useful comments zanya
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You are welcome.
